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Bloom Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/18/16

Please Continue

More please!

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by JC_The_Continuer03/20/16

Very good

Lots of potential
Still not a lot of detail, but I think that's coming
JC

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by Anonymous03/30/16

sci fi brewing

looking good, hope the chapters get longer.

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