All Comments on 'A Harem of Horny Heroines Ch. 01'

Sort of a video game/alternate universe thing. I like!

I do hope her and Max have further adventures; keep on trucking tenbears43.

But need a lot of editing. And longer chapters when you get the hang of writing.

It is hard to get interested in a tale that is not even 1 whole page long.

Good Luck.

dont see a lot of creampies

what the title says

Would love to read more of this

Why is this under nonhuman?

This is DarkMatter23, formerly known as MaximumPotential4vr. Just wanted to let you guys know that I had difficulties with my former account and made a new one. If you guys want to see the continuation of this story (although it will no longer be a harem) please check out the chapters titled Crystal. It starts the same way (maybe with a few different details) but the plot has been changed from a harem story to a more action story with detailed sex scenes and additional plots. By the way, the Crystal series currently has 9 chapters.

I want more of this

good start plz finish

Well... Who are the other super heroines that Max is gonna meet? Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Far far too short and NO follow up. So I suppose it was a waste of your time as well as yours for reading it. As short as it was the storyline was interesting , it's a shame you didn't follow through with it

sooo short like the style though

Good story has lots of places to go. Caught my attention and now I want more.