All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 02 Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story!!

Another great chapter!! I wonder how long before Cricket sneaks over to listen at the door and finds it open just a crack... ;)

foolscapfoolscapabout 8 years ago
Not one likeable character on the horizon and oh so predictable.

YAWN. I fell asleep after the first three paragraphs.

This is not a new way of seeing things, just a sad rehash of rationalizations for narcissism.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Worth the wait,as always!

singleotsingleotabout 8 years ago
Thanks

Always worth waiting for. Don't listen to the fool, I see he has submitted exactly zip.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
consistant deliciousness

Continue to totally love your very arousing explorations and exquisite pleasures of girls with girls and the extent it turns on the guys! So many ways to go pleasures to find. Cricket might enjoy the dressing rooms, trying on shoes. Continuous thanks for sharing your delicious imaginations!.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good chapter

I liked it. It has a lot of action, and it's a good 50th chapter. At this point, though, it looks like the Slut has completely won over the Lady and I used to like the struggle Gwen had with herself. She's clearly going to give anal and seems like she might enjoy some light BD stuff, so the only real taboo she has left is sleeping with other men.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Want more

So erotic and so very sensual. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

It's so great.... Waiting 4r a next episode

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

A really nice chapter that gets better with each reading. Hope the Nelsons take that Caribbean vacation that was hinted at.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

This is so erotic nd hot... Eagerly waiting 4r the next part

Advice_GirlAdvice_Girlabout 8 years ago
Another very nice chapter..

You are spinning a very erotic tale...so much fun...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Lezzie shite again

I will continually read the last few episodes and give 1 star!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fun reading

Wow hot stories, but a long read.. I've been at it for a week of spare time just to read part 2.

Thank you

Mr.g

StubbyoneStubbyone4 months ago

What a fun read this story is. I love that Gwen is pushing the guilt into the back seat, where it belongs, and enjoying her new friends and the benefits they have included. People can love more than one person at a time. And people can make love to more than one person. Her commitment to Tim and vowing to not lie to him about her female encounters is what keeps their love making fresh and hot. Most guys love kinky sex and girl on girl eminently qualifies. Your characters come to life. I love your writing style. 5-šŸ˜ŠšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜Šā€™s

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3/23/19 For all those wondering, yes there is more to come. Real-life has been very busy and finding time to write has been difficult. Gwen and Tim (and Natalie, and Cricket et al) will continue! We are a married couple who, while monogamous ourselves, believe that humans are...