All Comments on 'Heavy is the Head'

Bottom Fetishist on seeing three synonyms "ass" , "rump" 'n "bottom" on the last para of the Page1 & the tasteful spankin' scenario in the middle of Pg. 2 confirmed it !!!!

I 5-ed as well as 'Fave'-ed this story as besides bein' a First Time this is also a high class Spanko tale & bein' a hard-core Spanko at heart I firmly applaud your " Heavy is the Hand...er Head " : Attagal , you jus' made my Day !!!!!

Who was Sarah on page 2?

Read the story properly and you will find out.

You left out the most important part. Did he finish the paper work, or did I miss that?

I'm a bit of a sucker for a love story with some great sex. I can see potential for this to be a more parter, will you be writing a bit more on these guys?

Thanks for the story

"the semen was already becoming hard."

Semen doesn't behave that way. Though gelatinous at first, it turns liquid within minutes. It doesn't become hard until evaporation makes it so, which takes a lot of time. Guys who've masturbated (that's all of us) know this well. Some women may be ignorant of this. Shouldn't be writing about stuff they haven't experienced - whether ejaculate behaviour, or tire changing. Actually do it first, and more than once.

Nonetheless, 179AI'd still fuck you.

I really enjoyed it. I admit, I love uncontrolled orgasms like that. Awesome work. I'll be sure to read more by you!

Enjoyed this a lot, good combination of sex appeal and an adorable story, would love a follow up on it.

I hope he finds a way to tell his old man to piss off

You were doing so— easily a four or five star story, until you wrote, “...not even caring if she was on the pill or not. He'd risk getting her pregnant at the prospect of finally emptying himself into her womb.”

That sentence and a half made your once-sympathetic protagonist, Max, into a real dirtbag who no longer deserved the girl.

Or maybe he didn’t care because he loves her and will take care of her?

You know, when a man and woman love each other, sometimes, a baby gets born.

Or you could just enjoy the story because it a well written, fun story.

I wish there was a second part ~~~~~~5 stars

Who is Sarah? His ex's sister's name was Emma; at least, while they were in the coffee shop it was. And you never used her name again once she came to his place.

Wow is all I can say/.