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Heavy is the Head

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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh903/16/16

EnvywithJ : i figgered you to be a

Bottom Fetishist on seeing three synonyms "ass" , "rump" 'n "bottom" on the last para of the Page1 & the tasteful spankin' scenario in the middle of Pg. 2 confirmed it !!!!
I 5-ed as well as 'Fave'-ed this story as besides bein' a First Time this is also a high class Spanko tale & bein' a hard-core Spanko at heart I firmly applaud your " Heavy is the Hand...er Head " : Attagal , you jus' made my Day !!!!!

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by Anonymous03/16/16

Confused

Who was Sarah on page 2?

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by Anonymous03/17/16

@Confused

Read the story properly and you will find out.

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by Anonymous03/18/16

You left out the most important part. Did he finish the paper work, or did I miss that?

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by Hask22503/23/16

Love this

I'm a bit of a sucker for a love story with some great sex. I can see potential for this to be a more parter, will you be writing a bit more on these guys?
Thanks for the story

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by Anonymous09/28/16

Sex OK, but...

"the semen was already becoming hard."
Semen doesn't behave that way. Though gelatinous at first, it turns liquid within minutes. It doesn't become hard until evaporation makes it so, which takes a lot of time. Guys who've masturbated (that's all of us) know this well. Some women may be ignorant of this. Shouldn't be writing about stuff they haven't experienced - whether ejaculate behaviour, or tire changing. Actually do it first, and more than once.
Nonetheless, 179AI'd still fuck you.

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