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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/17/16

You know what to do dad

I'm 26, my step dad is 47, and I know how your daughter feels because I've been there. She wants what you want too trust me. I teased my dad so bad hoping he would just make that first move. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail if you want to hit me up. BTW...dad's been into stealing my panties for years so I've pretty much got him hooked too, just like your sexy daughter has you.

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by UAlbanyGirl51803/17/16

well done

Very good story. well written. honest. liked it.

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by Anonymous03/17/16

I agree with Stacy

I just showed this to my Dad and we both laughed. We had a three year foreplay dance before, in frustration, I finally blurted out, "are you ever going to just fuck me." He did just that and we've been doing it several times a day for almost two years.

She wants you.

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by Anonymous03/17/16

Go for it, try a little more each time

who knows maybe she wants your daddy cock inside her hoy wet young pussy! But you should write more of this story and soon!.

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yezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz:

excellent buildup fantastic buildup sensational buildup .................
keep going keep going keep going keep going ........................
she continues tease him she even gets bolder she even gets dangerous
doing things doing everything directly front her mother ...........................
sometime after he surrenders while they've got sex~session going down
his wife her mother catches them butttttttttttttttt the daughter the stepdaughter
orders him commands him - if he does stop he'll never everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
get privilege fucking her ever again [ whom does everybody think he'll choose ]
" hahahahahahahahahahahaha "

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by Anonymous03/17/16

super model

you said she was not supermodel thin but at 5' 4" she weighed only 95 pounds she is underweight by about 10 to 20 pounds and that would make her either a real young child or super thin like a super model so either you have no idea about a woman's body or you are talking about a true child and that ends reading your story for me

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by Anonymous03/18/16

Wow

Loved it so much, i know the feeling first hand...

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by rightbank03/18/16

is it only semi

autobiographical?

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by vixenlee03/18/16

Highly Arousing

I wish I'd thought of asking my daddy to rub my shoulders. I only asked him to rub my back... and it never went any further. I thought at the time he just didn't desire me. But looking back, he probably just had self control. I often wonder what would've happened if I'd been bolder, more seductive. I often fantasize about that. I love to read stories that play out the way I wanted it to go with my father. I hope you continue to write.

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by HardXsRHere03/19/16

"I Didn't Know What To Do"

Either Continue With Another Chapter
or Just Go Back And Play with Your Wee-Wee

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by HardXsRHere03/19/16

but at 5' 4" she weighed only 95 pounds

Her Brother Michael is Just 7 Years Old
He Met His Wife 10 Years Back
If Sam Weighed In at 95 lbs. And Stood at 5' 4"
She Is Barely 15 maybe 16 years old And This Story
Does Not Belong Here On This Site
Minimum Age is 18 Years Old

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by Anonymous03/19/16

hardxsrhere

Is right. Not about her physical description,,anyone can be short and thin,but about her age. This skews really young. "Foster her love of Disney movies so she doesn't think of the opposite sex?" Sounds like a 14 year old. Eww. No.

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Feedback taken.

Story has been re-submitted based on provided feedback and the edited version should replace this one within a few days. A special thank you to those who pointed out my ignorance re: body size; the severely underestimated age/weight relationship was not intended.

To those who requested a next chapter... it's in the works.

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by Anonymous03/19/16

ticked off anony re 14

What do you think growing pubic hair, breasts and having periods by the age of 14 means biologically speaking?

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by Anonymous03/19/16

Please continue....you cannot leave this just hanging right here

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by tlb141403/22/16

very hot tease

tell us more i have dreams of my daughter 22 years old every day

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by random_pervert04/21/16

Good job

Nice storyline so far. The characters are fleshed out pretty well as far as personalities go. Physically you have brought them to life in a believable fashion as well. Thanks for the good story and for sharing your hard work with us. Keep up the great work!

P.S. Don't mind the trolls or the rude critics.

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by Anonymous05/19/16

Do a second story!

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