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by Anonymous

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by jthserra03/02/04

Very good

on quitting and on the poem. A dancing rhythm here. Well done.

jim : )

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by Syndra Lynn03/02/04

Great Work!

I quit last Thanksgiving and this expresses the feelings so well! It does get easier-hang in there!

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by BooMerengue03/04/04

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Good job, Spike! Wish I could quit! Wish I could write about it if I did! Thanks!

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