All Comments on 'Dilemma'

by ShelbyBubbles

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lowphatlowphatabout 8 years ago
Excellent poem!!

I wish more poems here made sense like this one does! 5 stars from me!

haha_on_mehaha_on_meabout 8 years ago
Erotic Decision Made

I think this may be a concern for more than care to admit, there are always choices to be made, and compromises.It was very well written, it flowed along so nicely. It made me happy, it made me sad. Ultimately,I loved it.

Carnevil9Carnevil9about 8 years ago
Loved it!

This poem is a classic example of the existential dilemma that we all face: do we prefer the perfect yet predictable sex of the mechanical lover? Or the imperfect, yet possibly transcendent, sex of a human paramour? There is probably no one universal answer, but a well crafted piece of poetry like this can help us all distill the issues in our minds and lead us to deeper truths. Bravo!

DoogooderDoogooderabout 8 years ago
Bravo

That was excellent. Obviously you could relate because it was done so well.

ShelbyBubblesShelbyBubblesabout 8 years agoAuthor
Appreciation!

Thanks to all who have read, voted and/or commented on my first Lit submission!

A special THANK YOU goes out to Carnevil9, whom without the encouragement and motivation, this parody of a poem would never have been written. I eagerly await my next challenge. ;)

(Side note: This poem does not reflect any personal relationships I've had with any man...and "Big Dick" is quite the welcome and accepted member of the party) :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nursery rhyme for larger children

This is very poor stuff but at least consistently third rate.

ImaginaryLover62ImaginaryLover62about 8 years ago
Great Poem!

I d don't usually like poems, but this one was great! I believe every woman should have her Big Dick and enjoy them at will. In fact, I'd love to watch!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Awesome

Never been turned on by a poem before...

She made the right choice.

ShelbyBubblesShelbyBubblesabout 8 years agoAuthor
LOL

Nursery rhyme for larger children? LOL

You mean like....Giants? Obese children? lol Nah...This Nursery Rhyme is strictly for Adults. ;)

But every opinion is appreciated, whether you liked it or not. Thanks for reading! :)

tazz317tazz317about 8 years ago
A LIVING LIVE-IN DILDO VS

a life.....retards choose/ TK U MLJ LV NV

Paul_ChancePaul_Chancealmost 8 years ago
Awesome

Simply awesome!

Proactive_boyProactive_boyalmost 8 years ago
Good job!

Well put down. Might this be a start for greater things ? ;)

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

Loved it. BTW, a good man is not threatened by such

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