You should come out of your parents basement, into the light of day. It was a well written story. A few typo's, but a nice story line. Bonnie, disregard the basement boys. Keep up the good work.
by
Anonymous03/26/16
Fucking crap
From one of the site's premier trolls. Take one star and ponder this: karma's a bitch , ain't it. Go back to trolling other, better writers.
Or are you to old and ugly for even a fag to like your sorry ass. Oh wait maybe t's your ass he wants!!! Thanks for your vote now everyone will know it's a good story, n\man you are one dumbass fag!
by
Anonymous03/26/16
Wasn't my cup of tea
It was okay, but not spectacular. However, I don't believe that even if it were awful (which it isn't) that it would rate the abuse that has been heaped upon the author by some of the reviewers.
Pretty good story, And I came fairly quickly, mostly because i always look at the biography tab of the authors that I read. Bonnietaylor2 has a pretty hot photo posted, and combine that with her liking to see guys come...., well it worked to make me shoot a good load. Wish you could see it, Bonnie!
but Bonnie your a riot! You shoulda picked a different account name for writing instead of this one that the anonypunks are looking for to bomb you with 1s.
Thx for writing. :-)
And because the asshole of LIT who spells like a 2 year old gave you a 1 I'll give you a 5 to offset it. Hey annony try writing something besides your fun and dumb comments. God you really are THE ASSHOLE OF LIT!!
I gave Bonnie a 5 to offset your dumb ass vote of 1 and to back hand slap your fag ass. Et shit dumbass!! If you don't like it to fucking bad. If you let these writers alone we would leave you alone. Well maybe not Bonnie she fucking hates your old ugly fag ass and the rest of you too! Happy Easter asshole of LIT!
I like how you have both of them always being together, every single discovery is like a whole new world with your writing. I like your emphasis on her breasts every time.
by
Anonymous05/28/16
1*
for the whore of Lit. I see they banned your profile. About time. They should throw your ass off this site.
by
Anonymous05/28/16
I could care less if it's a good story
Because it was posted by that whore of Lit, it deserves a one star rating. I see they banned your profile finally. They should throw your worthless ass off this site.
by
Anonymous05/28/16
Yeah,
throw that worthless cunt off this site. Now she's polluting the incest category. Isn't bad enough she's polluted the LW category. 1* for cunt of Lit bonny/vasty.
English
nice !
Great Story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOW This is one great story!!!
LOVE how she is bring him along!! 5 for your words!!
Agree with previous anon.
Fucking idiot.
Hey Anonymous
You should come out of your parents basement, into the light of day. It was a well written story. A few typo's, but a nice story line. Bonnie, disregard the basement boys. Keep up the good work.
Fucking crap
From one of the site's premier trolls. Take one star and ponder this: karma's a bitch , ain't it. Go back to trolling other, better writers.
Why don'tyou go suck smoe cock asshloe of LIT!
Or are you to old and ugly for even a fag to like your sorry ass. Oh wait maybe t's your ass he wants!!! Thanks for your vote now everyone will know it's a good story, n\man you are one dumbass fag!
Wasn't my cup of tea
It was okay, but not spectacular. However, I don't believe that even if it were awful (which it isn't) that it would rate the abuse that has been heaped upon the author by some of the reviewers.
Thank you
for all your kind comments.
Interesting enough.
Pretty good story, And I came fairly quickly, mostly because i always look at the biography tab of the authors that I read. Bonnietaylor2 has a pretty hot photo posted, and combine that with her liking to see guys come...., well it worked to make me shoot a good load. Wish you could see it, Bonnie!
Good story
A little too short, could have use a little mre foreplay.
That
was meant to be more fore play.
Oh great body by the way, could lose the bra and panties and make it better sweetie!
I've enjoyed this story
Very erotic and sensual seeing the story through the eyes of the mother
HAWT story!*****
but Bonnie your a riot! You shoulda picked a different account name for writing instead of this one that the anonypunks are looking for to bomb you with 1s.
Thx for writing. :-)
Excellenet story so far
And because the asshole of LIT who spells like a 2 year old gave you a 1 I'll give you a 5 to offset it. Hey annony try writing something besides your fun and dumb comments. God you really are THE ASSHOLE OF LIT!!
Hey annony!!!
Keep your momma out of this. Stand up on your own two feet and then bend over so I can shove this big dildo up your ass , just like your wife.
Hey dumbass annony
I gave Bonnie a 5 to offset your dumb ass vote of 1 and to back hand slap your fag ass. Et shit dumbass!! If you don't like it to fucking bad. If you let these writers alone we would leave you alone. Well maybe not Bonnie she fucking hates your old ugly fag ass and the rest of you too! Happy Easter asshole of LIT!
5
foe content effort and to help offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote
great story
bonnie love it got me hard mmmmmm
another great chapter
It's worth a 5, it gets a 5*
Ignore the static in the basement. His keeper will find him soon
r
to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote.
Continuing to amaze
Great work. Loved Ch. 1 and like Ch.2 more
The closeness between both is interesting
I like how you have both of them always being together, every single discovery is like a whole new world with your writing. I like your emphasis on her breasts every time.
1*
for the whore of Lit. I see they banned your profile. About time. They should throw your ass off this site.
I could care less if it's a good story
Because it was posted by that whore of Lit, it deserves a one star rating. I see they banned your profile finally. They should throw your worthless ass off this site.
Yeah,
throw that worthless cunt off this site. Now she's polluting the incest category. Isn't bad enough she's polluted the LW category. 1* for cunt of Lit bonny/vasty.
report vastiesmith2 daily
let's get rid of the whore of Lit's alter ego
Jealous?
Sounds like anonymous is jealous of her relationship with her son. My own story with my mom is very similar.
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