by rene_houston
the double spacing here worked against you. With your phrasing the poem would be better suited with the lines meandering across the page. otherwise, pretty good.
jim : )
I thought it was very good. As far as the spacing it took my eyes all over. Needs regrouping loved the words very good indeed.
Delightful anticipation of sharing ten thousand kisses. A sweet solid foundation for which to build upon.