All Comments on '100 First Kisses'

by rene_houston

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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
I think

the double spacing here worked against you. With your phrasing the poem would be better suited with the lines meandering across the page. otherwise, pretty good.

jim : )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Very Good

I thought it was very good. As far as the spacing it took my eyes all over. Needs regrouping loved the words very good indeed.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Softly and seductively sensuous...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
First kiss.

Delightful anticipation of sharing ten thousand kisses. A sweet solid foundation for which to build upon.

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