I love this story.
I was getting a little worried after chapter 10 about the trial, but after this chapter I have a little more faith in it.
Your such a good writer and can tell a fantastic story.
I’m a big fan of your stories.
I read and re-read them with much pleasure.
Can’t wait for chapter 12!
Thanks for sharing your talent.
English
lovely
I enjoy the way you have more than a simple story arc. Adding different elements keeps your writing so fresh. Thanks for sharing.
Drivel.
Really badly written. Garbage!
love entire story from chapter 1-11 keep writing. ready for Chapter 12. keep up the good work!!
Addicted
Im addicted to your storys ellie i want more everyday! So happy to see a new chapter and cant wait to see where this goes for peri and josh&
really great story line
I'm loving the direction this story is taking, good job and thanks for the great read.
can't wait for more and more...
Love it!!!!!!
I love this story.
I was getting a little worried after chapter 10 about the trial, but after this chapter I have a little more faith in it.
Your such a good writer and can tell a fantastic story.
I’m a big fan of your stories.
I read and re-read them with much pleasure.
Can’t wait for chapter 12!
Thanks for sharing your talent.
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