Hard to read; spell & grammar check needed. I especially liked that you described her entire outfit including footwear. Most writers never mentioning her shoes or boots and that's my fetish. Please continue.
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Anonymous03/20/16
Oh My!
You do realize she just walked out of his office with her blouse still on the floor? Liked the story, but watch some of the details! Keep up the good work though!
Mike
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Anonymous03/21/16
Yes, check your descriptions and clothing. BUT, I want to read more tomorrow......
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Hard to read; spell & grammar check needed. I especially liked that you described her entire outfit including footwear. Most writers never mentioning her shoes or boots and that's my fetish. Please continue.
Oh My!
You do realize she just walked out of his office with her blouse still on the floor? Liked the story, but watch some of the details! Keep up the good work though!
Mike
Yes, check your descriptions and clothing. BUT, I want to read more tomorrow......
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