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damn!
Ladies are on fire this morning! Roller coaster if there ever was one. I am standing back watching from a distance...
Hmmmm......
Shades of denis haunts this shot gun of a poem. Nice one Lin.
Love it
especially the last lines.
great work
Thank you
Oh yeah...
this one has attitude. Kicking ass then suddenly, speaking instead of screaming. Well done.
When in
When in doubt do it like dennis! Great one lin!
Since when?
does one poet (Denis) corner the market on description? This poem written by Linbido is strong and full of attitude. Denis writes some terrific poetry, but the rest of us can use a few adjectives without being accused of copycatting. And c'mon poets--use your names. I did. :)
Thank you Angeline
someone had to say it. Seriously now. dh is a great poet and all that, has a distinctive voice, but he certainly did not invent the hard hitting caution to the wind phrasing etc, and I bet he feels uncomfortable being given some sort of mention every time people use his name as if it is an adjective in Webster's. I know I would.
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