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A Night with Mom Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/20/16

another

This needs a chapter two.

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by vastiesmith203/20/16

Most deficintly needs a second and maybe a 3rd

chapter. Mom show jerk him off next, and then maybe fuck his young hard cock! A young boy can satisfy his mom over and over again . His dad can't do that any more so why not take up with the son?

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by arrowglass03/20/16

This definitely needs follow up!

I'm hooked...reel me in with more chapters!

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by Anonymous03/20/16

Very good story

Many emotions revealed. Mom can help son without going all the way. Good results can be achieved with show and helping hand.

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by live4thebj03/20/16

I second that

This story screams for a sequel. You lost a star for this one line "...craps sake". Would have sounded better with Christ or whatever but craps just sounded stupid. ****

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by nic33103/21/16

Very hot

Gave it a 4, only because he used her name instead of mom/mommy. Otherwise, hot!

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by Wichitalineman03/21/16

Continue

This is a comment to incourage you to finish a good start to a really good story.

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by rightbank03/21/16

ok, I'm curious

but if we do get back together next week at the same time, please don't take it to the tone of the last scene on the DVD. If that is his idea of romance, no wonder he comes home with blue balls.

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by Morlan50203/21/16

Next chapter?

Will mom get it in the end; will mom be giving sonny boy a crack at her crack; will mom want to drink from the fountain of youth; will mom give sonny a sonny or daughter! Next week same time, same living room! Okay, I suck at humor! But I liked your story!

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by StanBrey03/21/16

10/10, go for a slow progression please.

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by Sex4lf5703/21/16

Loved it. Can't wait for chapter two.

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by Anonymous03/21/16

A Really Good Movie Mate

Bring on chap. 2. A real good story line going here. Looking forward to the Grand Opening.

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by swfb7003/21/16

bowser

hot hot hot

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by Anonymous03/21/16

Part 2????

Very good so far! Hope you post part 2 soon!!

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by Anonymous03/22/16

More please

Please,please,please more.

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by Anonymous03/22/16

COOL

I loved this slightly different approach which is a lot more believable than most of the stories on here. I was hoping he was going to stay out of her view and masturbate the first time without her knowing he was there.
I also like the way he calls her 'Tammy' with us being in no doubt of their relationship.
Please don't turn it into a family fuckfest.

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by HankWilliams195603/22/16

Good story and now I want to read the next part. Thank you for sharing.

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by Anonymous03/30/16

Ch. 1: ☆☆☆☆☆- (5-)

A very, very erotic first chapter; it introduces the protagonists to the readers in a masterly way. We know that mom is sexually frustrated very much and then some. Mom and son are comfortable around one another even when they discuss sex or rather the lack thereof. They each watch porn. They can watch it together... incest porn at that!
Mom is a keeper. I wish i were 20 & she were my mother!
♡♡♡
In an ideal world, when a son turns 18 he would start sleeping in his mom's bed for a year. It would be her moral duty to teach him how to fuck, how to make a woman happy, how to respect women and how to communicate with them!
♡♡♡
TO THE AUTHOR: YOU MUST WRITE CH. 2 & 3.

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by Primus2103/31/16

I will be there

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by Anonymous04/01/16

Part two please

Please make a part 2

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by Anonymous06/23/16

In my book, a lucky son who gets to fuck his own mother must feel be died and went to beaven!

He is in 7th Heaven & on cloud number 9 at the same time.
(Lucky mother-fucker!)

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by Anonymous07/07/16

Hot story but 4 fucking months for chapter 2?? WTF?!?!?

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by Anonymous07/18/16

its really good, but could be longer. part 2 is definitely needed in order to satisfy.

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by Anonymous10/01/16

tammy?

Why is it that someone ruins a good mother-son story by having the son use mom's first name????

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by Anonymous11/08/16

Great!

Thanks!

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by MaryAnderson01/11/17

Enjoying the tale

and looking forward to chapter 2.

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