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Huh?
Man, them must be some good drugs!
Totally ridiculous and fun fantasy.
You won't ever sell this story to a publisher, but it was fun and hot.....if so impossible it was just plain silly.
In the end, I liked it. Hell, I want to do that to some of the cashiers I run across over the years. So from the totally hot fantasy perspective, it gets the job done....but at the same time, the mind rebels.....because it's all so outrageous.
Thank you!
Re: ridiculous
Yeah, it's not meant to be publishable - just some quick fun. I actually wrote this on commission for a patron, but I think it was a fun idea and I'm happy with the outcome, for what it was. Glad you enjoyed!
I think it's great
It's probably more difficult to write a good mind-control story than a standard jackoff story. Either way, this is a well-written story that's hot. I don't agree with criticisms calling it "ridiculous" or unpublishable. The genre itself calls for "ridiculousness." The author made the situation work despite/within the genre's parameters. And the results are hot!
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