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My Naughty Neighbour Ch. 11

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/22/16

Wonderful!

It is so good to see this story back with a new segment! And, Michael and Lynn have finally admitted to each other that they are in love, which we readers have known for quite a while, now. Wonderful! I, for one, will be delighted to read more of their love, even if there is less visceral sex. Well done, and thank you!

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by Anonymous03/22/16

All right

Was afraid you gave up on this story. Glad it's back on. ⭐️

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by sekretu03/26/16

Glad you're back

I know those Canadian winters can be fierce and you have to spend a lot of time playing hockey, shoveling snow and drinking (the three canadian national past times) but I'm glad to see you back writing.

Especially glad this story seems to be advancing in something that is more than different variations of Tab A, Slot B. Keep up the excellent work!

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by Anonymous04/10/16

Amazing keep going

The sex parts are great but they are just stepping stones to the deeper romance between Lynn and mike it is very inspiring to see a great writer write something that brings happiness to all the readers out there keep going on with this story and show everyone again and again the deep love between mike and lynn

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by gara528905/14/16

Honestly been waiting for the exclamations of love for a while. Love the characters and the sex but you write the two of them so well and i'm looking forward to some actual character interaction.

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by noel547405/23/16

Can not wait for the next Chapter

I am very glad you have taken the time to bring out the love they both have for each other. Please keep up the GREAT work. I am also looking forward to the continued success of Michael and Lynn's story. Thanx again for the great story telling.

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by Anonymous05/24/16

Great story

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Please keep up the good job

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by Anonymous06/01/16

Very pleased!

I was iffy on ch. 01 but I read on and was HOOKED. Finished all 11 chapters this afternoon. Wonderful story and great emotional depth for the characters. I certainly hope you keep writing their story now that they've expressed their love for one another. Definitely want Lynn to confront Carter or see how that plays out. Well done!

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by slm5906/14/16

I love this story!

Like everyone else, I'm not surprised that Mike and Lynn have finally admitted what we readers have known for a while. I love where you've taken this story and look forward to it continuing.

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by TwoGunKidtgk07/03/16

Love it

Can't wait for the next 11 chapters

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by Anonymous07/23/16

Bravo

This is such a well written story that it would be an unbelievable shame if it were to ever end.

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by GryphonMeidh09/08/16

Wonderful

I love your creativity and can't wait to see how the story progresses from here!

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by Anonymous09/10/16

Unconclusive

After 11 chapters you left us no where. The sex descriptions were vivid but seems too much as you ran short of energy to conclude the story. When the story comes to a natural end then my 'too much' criticism should be forgiven. Thanks for a enjoyable reading.

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by Sensuallee10/07/16

Good reading

A truly interesting story about some rather strange people. I really like it.

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by dozen11/10/16

Excellent Story

I've been hoping that your two characters would confess to each other that they love each other.

I agree with you that non-stop sex, without character development or plot development, is not satisfying.

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