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A tasty morsel indeed to whet our appetite.
E, I must say how much I have been enjoying these little divertimentē, filling in the backstories for the main "Red Sister" storyline. You have truly, methodically constructed a monumental body of work.
Now to pick at the gnits. I beg your patience in advance. Many people find my method of questioning to be abrasive and in no way am I attempting to deliberately offend you. It is how I parse points of discussion for my comprehension.
If you consider me divisive and remove this from comments, you will not be the first or the last writer on this site to do so. I will not take offense. I strongly feel it is your decision to make.
The first minor disagreement; ".Mourn was crouched next to a spy hold, looking in and listening." In my opinion, this should either read: "Mourn was crouched within a spy hold, looking in and listening." or "From a hidden chamber, Mourn was crouched next to a spy hole, looking in and listening."
Then two questions for debate. I have discussed these with other writers and so far no one seems to want to acknowledge either.
Every pre-Tech society female breasts are for feeding babies and were generally ignored as superfluous. There was no such concept as "Privacy", no one was ever alone except for crazy hermits and closely hunted outlaws. Never, throughout their entire lives. From conception through birth unto death.
This pretentious nonsense that "Privacy" is a Constitutional right is actually the Modern failure to understand that the writers of the Constitution, in their society, intended the meaning of what we call "Confidential". And frankly, the avalanche of digital gadgets and the resulting flood of meta-data renders even that meaning obsolete.
The second question I have never seen addressed in erotic literature. Some male reptiles have a set of hemipenes while the female reptiles have a single cloaca instead of a separate vulva and anus. It just seemed to me that writers of Dragon//Human porn are missing out on the possibilities of a little more imagination.
@fanfare
I'm happy to hear you are enjoying these side stories. The next one will be a humdinger. This one was just for fun. ^_^ I suppose that wording was clunky. It happens sometimes (editing my own, you know).
I truthfully don't have the time to debate back and forth on general concepts prompted from the story, I mean no offense, but my "first thought" one-time opinion I can give on each would be:
I would consider your statement more likely in primitive and warm climate societies with enough trees and shade. Not so in desert or cold/wet/snowy climates regardless of tech. You cover it up, you don't see it as often, it's more of a thrill when revealed.
Pertaining to this story: Augran is a metropolis with its own tech, more tech than any place surrounding it. Here, privacy is a concept firmly set in place.
On missed opportunities for Dragon porn, you could go two ways:
A mythical Dragon comes in many forms and functions and in most cases isn't considered a true lizard regardless of the western or eastern influences.
Or more appropriate for this website: It's less relatable and not very sexy, thus not really a missed opportunity for most.
Trying to make a cloaca sexy to humans would be in the "experimental" area as you are bringing to mind coprophilia to some extent, or coprophage if you're describing oral.
Same problem with hemipenes. They are only used one at a time, and they come out one side or the other, squeezing between scales to extend out when normally they are not seen at all. I studied and dissected a gila monster as a major biology project in college. My specimen was male, and in its preserved state, both hemipenes were erect and outside of the body. I clearly recall the shape. It wasn't very sexy; looked like small sweet potatoes with root-like fringe on the ends.
Love you
I always come here every night before I sleep and check your submission. I read half last night but was too tired to continue and promptly zzzzzzzz.
Thank you for the awesome series and side tales. You are amazing. Marry me. Lol.
Very Enjoyable
I was hoping when this was written it would follow Krithannia's story more, but this was good too. I just wanted to point out the last line about being her being a "seed vessel." At the time that was written, it made no sense, now...its prophetic. One of my favorite things about your writing is how you write seemingly small things that payoff big later.
Tasty snack
A tasty snack before the next main dish. It was quite nice how unsure of himself and how easy he showed his emotion in this story. How far are we back from the main story?
Like always some musings/questions are a must-have from my side:
So Krithy was held captive/belonged to the other half dragon Mourn defeated? Was he there when she fled the pale elfes with the important stuff she stole or did she fall into his hands/lap at a later time?
I really need to get the patreon stuff.. my poor student self needs the other background stories ^^
:)
Cheers, Anon. :) Enthusiasm is greatly appreciated, but if I may kindly nudge, do get your REM sleep. A story will always wait until the next day and better rested usually means more enjoyment.
Hey, nasty_butler; Prophetic, eh? ;) I love when that does happen on occasion, but you give too much credit here; I wrote Krithy's bonus story before this one. The hints about that were more or less explained in her story. I see a bit more important here is that we now know Lethrix is watching his son--and those who ally with him--very carefully, and the black bastard knows something pretty private about Krithy that she hasn't even told Mourn about at this point. It mirrors what Lethrix has done to get to know Sirana and her allies in the current story.
Hello, Methusalem :) . Lol! And a simple erotic story suddenly gets complicated... ;)
Hmmm...sadly I'm not sure exactly where I could point in the main story to clarify (Ch 11, 12, 14, 15, 17, 19, 28? crap!), but Talov, Krithannia, Mourn, and Graul knew each before they "took over" the Guild in Augran. The half-Dragon they routed to gain possession of his Guild and contact (and wealth) was up against not only Morixxyleth but some crafty allies with a broad range of skills dedicated to seeing him succeed. The other guy did get lazy and over-confident and did not have a similar group of friends he could count on. Once challenged by a serious competitor, he lost. (Now recall what Lethrix was telling Thraekepesk--the purple Lake Dragon near Augran--about his betting his unborn son would kick the other's ass. Heh.)
So, no, Krithannia was not a prize or spoils from that fight; she was with Mourn before it and helped attain victory for the young half-blood, then helped build the Guild has a very shrewd and astute officer.
Where are we in the timeline? Here are your pertinent facts: Mourn escaped his Aunt at 137 years (he's young and still very precise about his age). When he met Sirana, he was 463 (she asked in Ch 10). Lethrix states he's shy of 200 here, but that could be 160-199 (his sire is so old that he doesn't care to count more than half-centuries at most). Talov states in Ch 20 it took "almost 300 years" to bring down the theocracy they accidentally created (so Mourn's likely between 183-199 when that theocracy shit starts).
Finally: the redhead in this story. (referenced in Ch 14 and Ch 28.)
Halete was the Guild officer who infiltrated Manalar and spied for them. She was eventually captured and tortured to death by order of the current Lord as a warning to other Guild members. Mourn spent 10 years wreaking vengeance for that and eventually killed off every heir, leaving the Church in charge of a vast and deeply religious land, and thus "creating" the theocracy of Bishops and the Witch Hunters that our crew goes up against in the main story. Halete is Human, short lifespan and dies in her prime, so you can estimate we're within 10 years of Mourn losing his shit and wiping out one power and leaving a vacuum for another to fill (for which he spends a lot of time trying to atone, after meeting the Tilabil and realizing what he's done. Dragons always fuck things up royally in the blink of an eye when they get directly involved in Human matters especially, and their offspring are often the same).
Or.... we are roughly 50 years after Mourn escaped the Underdark. (Yes, I could have just told you that but these side stories are supposed to give context to conversations held in the big one. I wanted to make sure everything lined up. ;) )
Thx for the timeline
Such a cute young baby dragon *laughes*
I reread the paragraph I highlighted and it seems I read too much into it:
"Don't bullshit an old bullshit artist, kid. I ain't never seen anyone wait as long as you to figure out the plumbing down there, but I assure you, it's workin' right proper if I get the gleam in the eye right. Been kinda expectin' tah hear moans and thump-thump-thumps comin' from Krithy's room since ye claimed victorious over the other guy and we got settled in here, tah be honest."
Got the expression he freed Krithy from the other halfblood. I'm sorry for being such a huge fan and not having the patreon background. There wouldn't have been a misunderstanding then. ^^
No worries
Hehe! Until recently, this was the youngest I'd ever written Mourn. ;) I've been told he's not very impressive when he's twenty. Yes, Talov was just commenting there that he noticed a familiar distraction in "the kid" since winning his first hoard, and the dwarf wouldn't have been surprised if Krithannia had decided to introduce him to her sensual side (Talov's got quite a libido himself).
And please don't apologize; we all do what we can, when we can. :) I refrain from just tossing them all up because I've been experimenting and not all are suitable stand-alone Lit stories, that's all.
Thanks
I think its pretty cool how much time ,research and creativity you put into what has to be one of the most epic sci/fi fantasy tales I have read.
I imagine you would have been a killer dungeon master back in the day.
Now its on to CH.33
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