by bob54z
I am so happy that you are back. I enjoy reading your story keep it up and don't forget about us. Please post again soon
I'm so glad your writing again I love the story, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Glad you are back. I feared that you had just stopped and gave up. But I'm glad that is not the case.
Now, I don't profess to be a rampant feminist or anything, I am reading this story so that should clear that up right there... but Sweet Tits?.... Sweetcheeks?? seriously??? Even though I haven't agreed with some of the narrow-minded political views involved, I have enjoyed the concepts and plot-line of the story enough to read up to this point. The plot kept me engaged enough to overlook and skim past the 'cut and paste' sex scenes, but I'm quickly losing interest. I hope things improve.
I really love this story but just want to give something to think about if the human population is exploding why doesn't he do something about it. he can make everyone unable to have children or only certain people able to have one child until the population is cut in half or more. once he relocates people to the 5 other planets he can keep the population at lower sustainable levels that way or make it so women can only get pregnant every 2-3 years maybe go into heat for a week and he can set up a program where it is decided when or if someone can have a child. also he can have his djinn show him all the murderers, rapists, terrorists and child molesters etc... and he can eliminate them immediately that should bring the population down considerably. also what about the other gods like the Norse, Egyptian, Hindu etc... do they exist and if they do why aren't they helping him tame their worshipers
Having pet names is cute I guess but the way he uses them all the time is annoying. Every sentence is sexy thing, sweet cheeks, hot stuff , fine ass or something of the like. You’re a pretty good writer but that issue is a little much. Thanks for the story