All Comments on 'Carnal Knowledge Ch. 15-16'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Soo damn good!!

I love your writing.... Hope you write many many more stories. The stories are panty wetting good .

LadyPartsLadyPartsabout 8 years ago
Where have you been?

Doesn't matter where you've been; I'm just glad that you're back!

Still loving this story!

RubiaLaFayeRubiaLaFayeabout 8 years ago
Very good reading

Please continue your novel. It is as good as some classic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
So good!!!

So excited for more!!! Also looove that the "nice guy" is not so very nice!

kitten_in_heatkitten_in_heatabout 8 years ago
So many dirty little weasels in the story

It's so frustrating to see her get kidnapped right after reconciling with Lord Rockdale. You won't let us catch a break, will you? Just when you think they've managed to get rid of Mrs. Biddleton and George, they come back like cockroaches.

At the same time, that Miles fellow is dreadfully up to no good. Kinda funny how he ended up with Miss Pratt though. (Or am I mixing up the characters?)

It was cute to see Eliza and William agree on the 'no bargains' bit. Though...I sincerely hope that doesn't lead to William breaking his word at some point later on in the story for the sake of conflict. God knows these two lead characters had enough conflict between themselves to go around since day one.

Anyway, it's great to see you return with another crucial development in the story as well as yet another irksome but attention-grabbing cliffhanger. Since you say it will most likely be completed in about 4 more chapters, will you be posting them up 2 at a time like usual or individually?

biggreenfrogbiggreenfrogabout 8 years ago
Totally hooked

Truly a wonderful story... I can imagine this as a naughty pride and prejudice movie..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Goodness! This is too good! Update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

It keeps getting better and better

ButterBearButterBearabout 8 years ago
You're Back!!!

Glad to see you've returned to your story. Well written!! Great piece :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Kitten in heat. You DICK!

Your comment is featured and I accidentally glanced at it before the getting to the story! Now I have to cry first before I read. And I can't read the story until I get my emotions in check. What was giddiness is now apprehension. Ugh. Jerk!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Brilliant

So glad your back, this was a brilliant chapter, please keep going

warpedmuserwarpedmuserabout 8 years ago
Moar!

I am so glad to find your stories amongst the sea of stories in this site. Please keep it up! I'll be waiting for your newest update

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More please!

Ive quite enjoyed this series, hoping for the next installment soon :)

kitten_in_heatkitten_in_heatabout 8 years ago
Lol sorry about that, anon

I forgot about how recent comments get featured on the side. Whoops! 😅😅

I didn't think much about addressing certain spoilers in the comments' section since you usually only get to it after reading everything else. I must've gotten too excited at getting to read the latest chapter to the series.

I hope I didn't ruin it for anyone else! 🤓

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Beautifully written

The tapestry of characters embroidered in this story is superb.

Maria

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Can't wait for the next update...this is a great story!

kris10ekris10eabout 8 years ago
WELCOME BACK MY LOVE😆

I've missed you terribly. I'm so happy you have returned and came back fierce. 🐯 I can wait to read what's to come. 💋

aries420aries420about 8 years ago
Excellent!

I've been obsessively checking for updates and was thrilled to see you had posted the latest installment. This story is my favorite! Excellent work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
John is so HOT!

I now prefer the Secretary.. A true man... A real gentleman.. Alas, we know where Eliza's heart is.. Or do we?? Please don't stop Emmeline, we cannot wait to find out.

Wonderful, tittilating chapter if you allow me to say so. You are very good at this and should be publishing!

JaneandJohnJaneandJohnabout 8 years ago
Wonderful!

Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter! This is one of my favorite stories ever!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Please don't abandon the story!

I can't tell you how excited I was to see another two chapters posted! I beg you, don't make us wait too long for the next ones!

CherrypeachCherrypeachabout 8 years ago
Hurray!

Glad to see you're back. Excellent chapter, too. Rockdale is kinda dumb, though. He's always thinking with his dick. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

LOVING the story - can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I've waited so long for an update.

THANK YOU.

I cannot wait for more.

applescherries105applescherries105about 8 years ago
Yey

Oh goood!! Such a great update with so much more story!! But now a cliffhanger?! You've totally got me hooked to this amazing fic, can't wait to see what happens.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Thank you!

I kept checking this genre specifically for updates on this story! Such a gripping chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
What a gripping story

Stumbled across this series today, now I can't wait for the next installment. What great characters. Keep up the great work.

jrj8jrj8about 8 years ago
STOP....

Whatever you are doing right this very moment... There is nothing more important than typing out the rest of the words in your head. Carnal Knowledge takes precedents over all else. You can take up your life where you left it, it will still be there.. (please...?) jeff

Luminessence0Luminessence0about 8 years ago
My eyes hurt!!!!

I stumbled across this story late last night and couldn't stop reading- when eventually I couldn't see anymore- had been reading through 4 chapters with one eye as the other just did not want to function anymore! Lol! Couldn't wait to wake up and read the rest! I LOVE the story, the characters, the intrigue! Can't wait for the next installment!!! Will be keeping a close eye on your page! Thank you for sharing with us!!!

hauntedgypsyhauntedgypsyabout 8 years ago
Lovely...

I am so caught up in this story... I can barely keep from clicking daily to check for new words from you. I actually cried out in excitement when I saw the new chapters had been added. Thank you for finding the time to add to this tale. It was lovely and left me, as always, wishing there was more. I will be clicking daily again until the next chapter or two arrive...

minxxxkittenminxxxkittenabout 8 years ago
Amazing!

Thank you so much for returning to us, and with such a amazing chapter! I absolutely love this story and is so happy to hear that you are planning to finish it ❤️ CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
:)

oh ... at last !! I was passing by in hope to find the new chapter ... I was surprised to find it :) thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nice work!

Just wanted to add my voice to the chorus of others singing your praises! You've written a great story that I am totally in love with. I've been checking back regularly - sometimes daily - for well over six months, and am so happy you decided to continue. I'll be waiting patiently for the final chapters. Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
:D

Thank you for posting. I had forgotten about this series, and as I was browsing the new submissions I came across the new chapter, and I knew I had to read it. Couldn't stop reading, it's that good! This is definitely one of my favorite stories. Thanks again

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 8 years ago
Welcome back!

Looking forward to the conclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
OMG!!

First, I kind of thought you might have died or you had no way of getting the the internet, dramatic I know but you just...went away & I was looking for a conclusion regularly. I don't even read the other stories...I just wanted this one!

So here it is, I was so excited, I LOVED it...and the ending of Ch.16...the ending! What!??

I know you have your own life & it may be hard to crank other chapters out but.....PLEASE don't make us wait 6 months again!?? Please?

I think what's so very perfect about this non-consent is that we love all the characters, each character is developed & beloved. And we GET why she's happy with the arrangement & we understand why he is the way he is...you created that. This is publish worthy. I enjoy it & look forward to it all. And when it's finally over, I'll be sad. I know it.

Thank you for Chapters 15-16. Now go write some more magic! ; )

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
SO evil!

Emmeline, you are so evil! (But please don't stop)

First, thanks for keeping up with the story. I'd rather wait six months for an installment than never get one at all. I love this story, and this chapter is great writing. Ok, sure, Eliza has been kidnapped, but other than that, people are getting what's coming to them-good and bad.

I'm so relieved that Violet is getting away from Egbert (perfect name, btw)! Although, we don't know if it's "safely" away, do we? You wouldn't be that mean, would you?

This is a great chapter and has me looking forward to the next. I can't wait to see what happens. Oooh, I know!! If only George could end up as Egbert's literal whipping boy and Mrs. Billingsly servicing Henry's stubby little wang. Or vice versa--in fact, that might be even better. Just desserts all around.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

You can't leave it there! More please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
OH GOD!!!

I don't think I can wait six months for the next chapter. Your killing me!! I found this story yesterday afternoon and just couldn't put it down. I don't usually read Historical Romanace/Erotica but I have a couple that I love. Your story is now added to that list.Biker, Rockstar, Paranormal, those are my usual. I would buy this if it was available on Amazon to add to my Kindle

Please have mercy and try go get us the next chapter. You are a very good writer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Not another six months!!

I am actually wishing this story was in novel form!! There's never enough to keep reading! Was so happy to finally see more of it posted!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good writing

Good story, good characters, very sexy. I think you can get a book deal. The only thing I would advise is to play up the main characters and make them more likable or charismatic. Good dialogue. I hope you finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Yay!

Am so excited to see a new chapter here! Discovering newly posted chapters for good stories such as this one is better than Xmas! Have not read this chapter yet but just wanted to voice my appreciation for keeping this story going. You rock, Emmeline!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love it!

I absolutely love the story!! Please keep going!!!!

mcollectmcollectalmost 8 years ago
Wow Every once in a while Literotica hits a home run. This is one of them!

I found this a month ago and can't wait for the next chapters. Is their a way to be informed when a new chapter come on line?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Just found this story last night and stayed up most of the night reading it. The writing is so good. The wit is cool and logical and unforced, the emotionality is warm and satisfying, and the sex is smoldering with brilliant and intensely hot (and constant) eruptions. I really enjoy this couple together, their banter and sparring and the way there's always warmth with the heat and vice versa. Please, please post more as soon as you can!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please keep going!

I have long read free fiction and fan-fiction online. I have to say finding stories like yours is like finding polished gold in a large pile of rotting hay! This could be a good novel! I'm serious! The plot is entertaining, the character build up is beautiful and I cannot wait for the rest of it. I spent all night reading this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great story

This could be a novel. I'd purchase it in a heartbeat. Good luck with your writing and please finish the story. I know they will wed, but I'd just like some closure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Wow. Loved it this would make a great novel. Am dying for part 17. When will it be available. You left me hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Trying to be patient

I keep checking every day for the next piece...please please please, add some more and don't give up writing..I was already crushed by the finale of the walking dead cliffhanger, don't send me over the edge with stopping here at this point. Lol.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
You're Brilliant! !

I've been reading romantic sexy novels since I was 13, and Im 30yrs old now. My favorite authors are Lisa Kleypas, Brenda Joyce, Catherine Coulter, Judith Mcnaught etc.. they're the best selling authors and I would say you would be one of them someday!! You have such talent, it's brilliant! ! More power to you! Thank you

Naughty Girl from Manila

Eve86Eve86almost 8 years ago
Waiting...trying not to go crazy.

Ahhhhhhhhhhh! So what happens next???? You're so mean to make us wait eons. 😋

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Amazing

Like many others I keep checking for updates every day......with bated breath!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
So amazing

I feel like I am constantly reading different stories on here but this undoubtedly top three best I've ever read. I just started and finished yesterday and I'm so excited for the next chapters!!! Just know that your story is amazing. I've been literally dreaming different endings up because I'm that obsessed.

OliviaBranchOliviaBranchalmost 8 years ago
Absolutely lovely

This story has such delicious characters and is fantastically well-written to boot. Please finish it! Preferably in the next week or so, so I don't go mad thinking about it.

minxymissminxymissalmost 8 years ago
Loving it

I think my comment title sums up my feelings for this series succinctly enough. Like many, the first few chapters had a few elements that made me hate Rockdale but as the series has progressed, you've really developed his character in a way that redeems him to some extent.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, if you have published anything else, anywhere else, please let us know! Your writing style is very engaging and enjoyable ☺

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Still waiting..

Hoping the author of this one DOES come back and finish..it's just way too good not to finish this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please tell us when the next one is....

Please tell us when the next one is.... I'm going to die waiting for it..... i hate waiting.... it's too good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Anxiously waiting

This is such a well written story. I just couldn't stop reading it until I came to the end.

I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

Emmilune you are a wonderful writer!

This is the perfect cross between historical romance and erotica. Exuct, but actually has a great story line.

If you ever decide to actually publish a book (or if you already have) I would gladly purchase it. I love your writing style.

culturedmasochistculturedmasochistalmost 8 years ago
Eagerly waiting for more!

Just like dear Eliza, I simply can't get enough.

MorvorenMorvorenalmost 8 years ago
Brilliant!

So glad you've added another chapter and it was worth the wait. I think you are one of the best writers on this site, and this story is a classic. You ought to publish, it beats 50 shades hands down. Much better quality writing and a more engaging & believeable story. Hanging out with bated breath waiting for the next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
CANT WAIT!!

Omg I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
want to cry 😢 can't wait for next chapter

Please hurrrrrry with the next chapter .... Awesome work you're doing

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
thank you

I had given up hope you would finish . This is amazing .Please hurry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Oh my god.

More!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Ahhhh this was worth the wait omg

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Next chapters please!!

Still waiting and waiting..even if this author decides to make a book and put it out at least give us details where to find it to finish the story!!

NichyNichyover 7 years ago
Just chipping in...

...that I'm also eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Ohhhhh more more more oh please don't abandon this story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

A little worried that we havnt heard from emmeline. Hope you will continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter!

curvy_mooncurvy_moonover 7 years ago
Dying for the Next Chapter

Please continue with this story! Its one of my favorites so far. Beautifully written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
something for everyone

sex, love, family matters, society matters, scandal - all the makings of a great novel!

beca8185beca8185over 7 years ago

Please let nothing bad happen to her or the bad and please update soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Have to know how it ends!!

Love this story! My favorite by far! Should be a published novel! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
why!

Why have you not published the next chapter I am frantic!

EmmelineEmmelineover 7 years agoAuthor
I'm sorry!

I'm trying I promise! Hopefully not too much longer!!

Thanks for your extended patience! :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow!

I've just read all the available chapters. Fantastic story. I can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
It is very good

I'm amused at everyone begging for another chapter. We really are baited with anticipation.

But you should definitely consider a book. Your writing style is lovely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Seriously

These are well written, and I just found them yesterday. The cast of characters, the turn of events all of it works really well. As people say you should make a book. Definitely enjoy this and am happy to hear that the next chapter should be happening soon. Still though these chapters were published in March, I'm all bummed out from binge reading the chapters to know what happens next. I'm not the most patient person.

I really don't want her to lose the baby. So I hope that doesn't happen. I'm excited to see where the whole story goes. More please definitely!

littlebittyjetlittlebittyjetover 7 years ago
First time I've cried reading a Literotica story

My dear Emmeline,

Your gift and talents are astounding. My only regret is that your fans have to wait for the conclusion of this story.

Your newest fan,

lbj

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please not another one!!

Please DON'T be one more author with ANOTHER unfinished story!!

We're dying here!

FreekgirlFreekgirlover 7 years ago
More please!!

I love this story. Please write more, I am dying to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Returning....

I keep checking back to see if there's been another chapter released...I've been patiently waiting for months. Please continue with your story, it's so well written. I'm hooked!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More please!

This is the best thing I have found on literotica. Period. Please don't leave me hanging forever. I sooo want to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Anticipation!!!

By far the best piece I have ever read on this site! Be proud of your ability to tell a tale! Wonderful!! Seriously the best multi-chapter piece I've read! I can not wait to read the next chapters. Thank you for a delightful, rough, romantic, erotic, amazingly human story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I am hooked and WAITING!

It is a fabulously well written plot and story. Please publish a book and release the next few chapters. I know the pressure is intense you are always getting this question but any thoughts on when will you release the next chapter? I keep checking for an update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More please!!

What a great story! By far the best one on the site. Can't wait for the next chapter, please publish soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing series

I loved the chapters, i hope you finish the remaining chapters soon! You are an awesone writer. This should be published!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Dear Emmeline

We know you have a very busy life but we'll love to have an update from you.

Love this story and can hardly wait for the next chaper.

Thanks

Maria

joodlejoodleover 7 years ago
Can't wait

Thankfully I discovered this series only recently, so have not had to endure the frustration of many. I've been through puh-lenty of that with the "Lena" saga, the "Rebellious Slave", "Egir's Captive" and so on and so forth. But one thing is true--those stories are always the best. The best. That is what gets all these readers in such a frenzy. We are at about the 6 month mark so I expect we will see another chapter from you soon. At least I hope. This rivals some of my favorite series, most definitely, so I congratulate you on that. Your story has depth, and yet, is extremely hot. Some of the stories like these have a lot of depth and plot twists that are entertaining, but not nearly enough sex (or long enough sex) to balance it out. People come to Literotica to be aroused, and you definitely do that. Exceptionally well. I only submit reviews for superior stories. Just can't say enough, except "keep writing". It is ok to have long breaks between chapters. Just don't throw in the towel. You are too good to quit. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Can't wait for more

You are a talented author. Early await my of this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Waiting with bated breath

I've been lurking on Literotica for 16 years now. I've seen a lot of garbage around here, and I've read some very good stories too, but they are few and far in between. Yours is the first story that has compelled me to come out of lurking, do a slow emphatic clap, and post a comment. :)

This deserves to be published. You have an engrossing story, and your writing style flows. And yet the biggest strength of this story is your character development. Both leads, and even the supporting cast, are nuanced people.

I don't know what's happened in your life between March and October 2016. I respect a writer's right to privacy and space. However, please know that there are legions of us waiting with bated breath for you to continue this amazing story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just checking in

Just lurking. Waiting to see if there are new chapters.

galifreyagalifreyaover 7 years ago

Hi! Just checking up again.

We know that you're a busy person, as we all are, but this story NEEDS to be completed. I finished reading this series a few weeks ago and I must say, I can't help wanting to know what happens next. You're a great writer, but left us on a terrible cliffhanger. What comes next? How did George come back? What are Barlow and Cavendish planning? The suspense kills 💔

Hopefully you'll put up another chapter soon.

PS: I'd give this five stars again if I could, but apparently you can only rate once, so have this instead: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

galifreyagalifreyaover 7 years ago
BTW

Dear Emmeline,

I forgot to mention that I hardly ever comment. I've just made my account but I've been lurking on this site for 6 years now as an anon-user, and in all that time, I've only commented 5 times, this being the fifth (including my earlier comment). This story rivets people, just like Sacrifice, another multi-chapter story about a DomSub relationship, written by pandarus. Great stuff, really great. You've built yourself a fanbase, friend.

PS: More five star: 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Waiting!

Wow, you are a very talented writer. Not just the erotica but the overall story was also great. Can't wait to read the rest of it. Please write soon!

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 7 years ago
Helloooooo?

Emmeline, I understand how pesky life creates situations that make writing a challenge. Please post a comment or something, letting us know you're still out there, still intend to finish this story but are waiting for the muse and opportunity.

This is such a good story! Very erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
more please

Looking forward to reading more of this lovely story... hopefully soon!

You've got us enthralled

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What Happens next??

I'm dying to know what happens next!!! Please finish the story. Don't torture us like this.

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On again, off again writer of smutty romance. I’m sorry Carnal Knowledge isn’t finished. Maybe someday.

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