All Comments on 'Tablet Master Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excellent beginning!

Looking forward to more. Hope it is soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Interesting.

Intriguing. I'd encourage you to find a different way to explain when she calls things to her rather than "using her telekinesis." Too repetitious.

Timtom12Timtom12almost 8 years ago
I would love to read more!

This sounds like the start of something great. Maybe put some more thought into her magic and the abilities/limits but I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
i avoid first stories

but this caught my attention. nice! good story, good writing.

i look forward to more!

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