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bare flame in orchid forest

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by Anonymous

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by annaswirls03/02/04

Your words are a timeless mosaic

just wanted to make sure you read these words again, they are so beautiful. Mirror mirror look at both:

"so join the few
shattered lost
and found shards
good for mosaic
eye corner grit for glue
powdered lime"

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by Liar03/02/04

I can just agree

- this is balanced, tender, tasteful in every way.

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by Mia Moore03/03/04

mirrors

a life, a reflection
of perfection
is so quiet at times
then screams that Life is
what it is
and then some
:)

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by duddle14602/05/07

enduring

Life is a mosaic of laughter - tears - sorrow ~ joys that go to make a mosaic of each person's life.

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by tazz31705/11/12

EMITTING SMOG AND SMOKE

to save the fruit, TK U MLJ LV NV

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