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annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
Your words are a timeless mosaic

just wanted to make sure you read these words again, they are so beautiful. Mirror mirror look at both:

"so join the few

shattered lost

and found shards

good for mosaic

eye corner grit for glue

powdered lime"

LiarLiarabout 20 years ago
I can just agree

- this is balanced, tender, tasteful in every way.

Mia MooreMia Mooreabout 20 years ago
mirrors

a life, a reflection

of perfection

is so quiet at times

then screams that Life is

what it is

and then some

:)

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
enduring

Life is a mosaic of laughter - tears - sorrow ~ joys that go to make a mosaic of each person's life.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
EMITTING SMOG AND SMOKE

to save the fruit, TK U MLJ LV NV

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