Son's Lust Over Mom's Boots

why so short?

i don't understand why it was so short ? you are going to add more chapters, do you want a low score or something ? 2.

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Great start. Keep going.

One minute the father remarried the next he passed away? Not good writing at all..

Consistency

At one point you say you're divorced, then a widow, duh. Also first mention of tits is 36D then 38D. A little editing would go a long way and it could have gone further.

The other reviewers are right

That did suck. First if you are going to do a short story at least have one session of sex in it. The grammar is horrible and how is it he is pissed off one minute with her holding his cock and the next he is offering her a hand or was that the daughter? Either way it needs a lot of work. Remove edit and repost with more content and properly edited. 1 star.

Terrible.

That's about all I can say.

Nice short story

Quite a few moms like to tease son. They like to get son aroused and knowing he is jerking off for her is a thrill.

started off promising

but it was over way too fast and the focus on the mother's boots felt like an afterthought instead of anything with meat and potatoes. It's a good start but not a good story overall.