Excellent, well written series for exhibition fans. Ali (or 'Perky' as I like to think of her) is a great character. Particularly enjoyed her new attitude to working at the diner! Look forward to reading further instalments.
Loved the first chapter, but this one felt like too much exhibition too soon. Destroys the characterization of Ali and makes her almost just another Carol. Hope the coming chapters correct that.
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Very entertaining!
Excellent, well written series for exhibition fans. Ali (or 'Perky' as I like to think of her) is a great character. Particularly enjoyed her new attitude to working at the diner! Look forward to reading further instalments.
A certified classic
I can't believe these 'Ali Katz' stories have not generated more comments.
I guess most people really do like the dumbed down easy sex story.
But I will always come back to my favorite girl. Ali!
Too much too soon
Loved the first chapter, but this one felt like too much exhibition too soon. Destroys the characterization of Ali and makes her almost just another Carol. Hope the coming chapters correct that.
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