Bondage Wedding, Obedient Gift

Stimulating

Very hot and twisted plot. I love it!

Well done

Your writing is excellent. The scene was set, anticipation built, and the descriptions took the reader along on the ride. It was a great job of making sure the story, like the characters, reached a climax. Thanks for the enjoyment.

Powerful

A powerful and joyful story to illustrate the attraction of the BDSM lifestyle. You've captured the thrill of power exchange, of letting yourself go, of trust that the other has your pleasure in mind.

The gentle conversion, tapping into deeply hidden longings was masterful, as was the description of the feast.

I'll look forward to other works.

Better to be Lucky and Good!

Miranda was Lucky She Didn't Know Bondage Lingo and Good With Her Cooking! She has a Profession and a New way of Sexual Life! Great Story!

BDSM Wedding.

Great story. Lucky for Miranda her fantasy came true. Jenny must have known more about her than she knew herself. I had not imagined, ... well, years ago I read The Story of O. A woman was an edible centerpiece. Your story was well written and filled with erotic stimulus. Thanks for sharing your knowledge and writing talent.
JudyLee

What a great Wedding!

What a good story! Easy to read and very easy to enjoy! Thank you for this. An easy 5*.

Jules

Loved it!

What a great story. Well paced and erotic rather than crude which kept me glued to the screen and hard in my pants.

More

This story begs for new chapters, Miranda needs that spanking like she saw Jenny get and a gang bang would be needed as well.

Well written and entertaining, although i am not into BDSM I actually hate it. But your such a good story teller keep on writing please. this time I,m giving three stars for the wring.

Whew HOT!!

That was my kind of wedding!! Please keep writing!

Good read

Dec 31, 1999 our BDSM wedding. This was a bit more over the top but it brought back some wonderful memories. Thanks.