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I was expecting
something sinister after reading about the crones braids, but this is eloquent and lovely..
"when I am a windchime, my debt will be paid" :)
that line is perfect and very transcendental, you go girl!!
I Know I'm Meddling
I hope this is not a thing verboten, but I just couldn't keep my hands off this. It felt like clay, and I just kept rearranging it. I stripped away all the capital letters, punctuation marks, and spacing, because I loved all the words and the images evoked, but I wasn't getting it. Once everything was gone but the words, a poem jumped off the page for me. Maybe I still didn't get what you were trying to say, Boo (may I call you by your first syllable. Forgive me if I did a bad.
malachite and agate
turquoise and jade
twisted in the tendrils
of deadly nightshade
narrow and jagged
smooth and inlaid
golden with copper
hidden in shade
mystically woven
into a crones braid
she chimes down the lightning
a thundering tirade
when I am a windchime
my debt will be paid
Since I asked people about what they'd be as a windchime, I'm really glad to find someone taking the lead. Sad to say, I'm still not on board with my own poetic rendering on this! You've given me a nudge!
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There's something mystically calming in reading about a wind chime.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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magical
There is something ethereal and charming ~ about wind chimes.
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