I know I shouldn't laugh at Moons predicaments but it sure is both nice to see her in family bliss and laugh at the trouble she has for it. Accepting Shelly and Gloria into the family was such a heartwarming deed, not to mention it gives them the means to girl-power gang on Cloud at any moment. I would really like to see his take on the whole baby making thing as well.
On the other side we got a bit more info on how this whole fashion business is run and what matters to the conglomerators, though props to Moon for inspiring them to some fine deeds as well. Angie & Co. are never far away, good thing as Robins knowledge and attitude saved the day.
Gave it an easy 5* and of course am looking forward to more soon :)
I love what you're doing with this story. It has the humor and some of the shenanigans of Angie and company but is still its own story, too. The adoption of Shelley is a nice twist. 5 stars as always and I look forward to the next chapters.
Great continuation, gave you 5 stars with no hesitation.
Sorry I took a while to comment, you know why, but I eventually got around to reading Moon 4 (yes, we do have internet coverage here in the wilds of the English borderlands, but it really only works on alternate Fridays in months with an 'R' in them) and it's as warm and funny as ever. Moon's a funny, wittily sharp girl with a good way of looking at things, and with Angie and Cassie in her corner the world better watch out, especially Cloud. With Robin and Tommy and his ability to think in spirals as his own role models, I'm sure Cloud's going to be a force to be reckoned with. I'm really into this story, as is She Who Must Not Be Mentioned, deff 5 stars from both of us!
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Anonymous04/09/16
Great
Love this. Love Angie more! Please, please, pretty please. Bring Angie Back.
Definitely looking forward to more of this story, I can see it changing shape from the original already, so we're waiting with bated breath for what comes next. 5 stars, quality work, please keep doing what you do so well.
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Anonymous04/13/16
Like the story, but this is surely a whoopsie
Shelley's photographer buddy, Max, hung around a lot. He was, somewhat to Shelley's disappointment, but certainly not mine, entirely proper.
It wasn't as if Shelley had to fend him off.... They got married last year, when Shelley was twenty, .... Since Shelley and Gene, her husband, live next door to us, I can't say she misses her other mother.
In consecutive paragraphs, no less. So what really is his name?
English
On good way to a team
I know I shouldn't laugh at Moons predicaments but it sure is both nice to see her in family bliss and laugh at the trouble she has for it. Accepting Shelly and Gloria into the family was such a heartwarming deed, not to mention it gives them the means to girl-power gang on Cloud at any moment. I would really like to see his take on the whole baby making thing as well.
On the other side we got a bit more info on how this whole fashion business is run and what matters to the conglomerators, though props to Moon for inspiring them to some fine deeds as well. Angie & Co. are never far away, good thing as Robins knowledge and attitude saved the day.
Gave it an easy 5* and of course am looking forward to more soon :)
Shades of Angie and Cassie
I love what you're doing with this story. It has the humor and some of the shenanigans of Angie and company but is still its own story, too. The adoption of Shelley is a nice twist. 5 stars as always and I look forward to the next chapters.
J
Great continuation, gave you 5 stars with no hesitation.
Sorry I took a while to comment, you know why, but I eventually got around to reading Moon 4 (yes, we do have internet coverage here in the wilds of the English borderlands, but it really only works on alternate Fridays in months with an 'R' in them) and it's as warm and funny as ever. Moon's a funny, wittily sharp girl with a good way of looking at things, and with Angie and Cassie in her corner the world better watch out, especially Cloud. With Robin and Tommy and his ability to think in spirals as his own role models, I'm sure Cloud's going to be a force to be reckoned with. I'm really into this story, as is She Who Must Not Be Mentioned, deff 5 stars from both of us!
Great
Love this. Love Angie more! Please, please, pretty please. Bring Angie Back.
Love the re-post, love the way it's going
Definitely looking forward to more of this story, I can see it changing shape from the original already, so we're waiting with bated breath for what comes next. 5 stars, quality work, please keep doing what you do so well.
Like the story, but this is surely a whoopsie
Shelley's photographer buddy, Max, hung around a lot. He was, somewhat to Shelley's disappointment, but certainly not mine, entirely proper.
It wasn't as if Shelley had to fend him off.... They got married last year, when Shelley was twenty, .... Since Shelley and Gene, her husband, live next door to us, I can't say she misses her other mother.
In consecutive paragraphs, no less. So what really is his name?
Sorry about that
He's Gene. Max is his nickname (or is that just a bad attempt at a save?).
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