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Postcard #3 from a blue planet

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by sandspike03/04/04

theres a lesson here....

don't go to the hood with clueless people. Good short
poem, they are my favorites.

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by Maria239403/04/04

I have read this

ten times already, and it gets even better each time..darkmaas? from what well of inspiration have you drunk? i wanna sip ;)

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by Anonymous03/05/04

Slice of life...

....a vignette captured like a cricket in amber. Perfect gem.

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