I loved all of it! I hope you continue it or write another one.
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Anonymous03/28/16
Thank you.
This has been a wonderful story.
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Anonymous03/29/16
Fantastic story!
It has hot sex, but also real character development, which I like. Your reader ends up CARING about the characters, and wanting things to end well for them. I'm glad that's what happened.
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Anonymous12/18/16
Asshole comments for a shit story
I would've beat the crap out of both of them with a bat. The pussy just drives away.?! You need an enema. When you do it, stick it in your ear to flush out your brain.
This story has been fantastic!
I loved all of it! I hope you continue it or write another one.
Thank you.
This has been a wonderful story.
Fantastic story!
It has hot sex, but also real character development, which I like. Your reader ends up CARING about the characters, and wanting things to end well for them. I'm glad that's what happened.
Asshole comments for a shit story
I would've beat the crap out of both of them with a bat. The pussy just drives away.?! You need an enema. When you do it, stick it in your ear to flush out your brain.
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