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It Made Me Very Wet!
OMG this story is awesome! It's very sweet and romantic, and yet so erotic. It is so full of emotion which makes it very believable. I love the details in the thoughts and actions. And such wonderful, visual, sexy descriptions! I couldn't keep my fingers off myself and ended up pulling out my favorite dildo, a black one, to finish myself off. It was incredible! Thank you for sharing.
nice start
keep it (& us) cumming
RA
Great story!!
Erica the build up and the background story was what made the story that much more enjoyable, great job.
Outstanding, outstanding!
Please continue this story, it's very exciting.
Very good
Well written. Build up to and sex scene very good. Keep it up.
Hot Hot Hot
So hot. Made me come. Loved the vivid detail in the sex scenes. :)
Amazing!
I just cannot stop read your story again and again. Your simple story ipmressed me to the depth of my soul. I read many top stories at Literotica, but yours is just beyond measure. What a fortunate
find!
I like to read about girls submitting to raw unrestricted passion, their emotions, their desire to love and be loved.
Let me describe what thrilled me so much.
Sara, the protagonist, acting like 'Mother Goose' before that, is jealous to Kal, seeing pretty white girls exiting from Kal's dorm room, hearing suspicious sounds, listening rumors about his 'harem'. It's funny, but it seems like Sara doesn't see herself beautiful. It's the greatest pleasure to read about emotions of a young innocent girl, feeling temptations of primal passion. Aren't you a professional writer of bestsellers in disguise?
Her sexual awakening has begun.
The girlish chit chat at the lounge is hilarious. I felt like I was near by those girls and eavesdropping. Your attention to small details is amazing. You're tingling my imagination. Pretty 'good girls' with various traits and personalities, it would be fun to get to know them better.
What can I say about sex scenes? Rare romance novels with wine and candles consist such tender moments of touching and caressing. You set the 'cock worshipping' tag, but in fact Kalu worships his white lover's body. He makes Sara so horny she regrets that she's on the pills.
The scene is so big and rich, it's just enough to make multiseasoned series. Just don't make Kal share his girls, it would ruin the magic you created.
Thank you. The world had become a bit better when you started your story.
MORE...
One word, HOT!!!!
Loved it
Well-written sex scenes. Those test a writer's skill.
Amazing story
This was a really well written story and highly accurate description of what it feels like to be with a black man for thw first time. The desire to see it, the amazement of it whe she does, and the need to make live to it. Submit to it. Great story
Thank You!
I'm so happy you enjoyed it! The power of black men is indescribable! There is nothing on earth more beautiful and sexy than a gorgeous woman submitting to black cock.
-E
Great Story
You had me cumming in no time after using my dildo on myself. Only wishing it was me getting pounded and him cumming inside me.
More stories like this.
Emma
Awesome!
This is easily the hottest story I have ever read! It is breathtaking in its naughtiness, sensuality, and realism. Sara seems so real and sweet, and so it's extra mesmerizing as she falls into erotic obsession. I kept on coming as I read! I couldn't keep my hands off my pussy! It is so well done, and when we got to the part where she says "Like in my dreams. More than anything I want to see your dark body against mine" I wanted to cry with lust. So hot and beautiful!
Love Every Word
I really do love every word. Nothing should be changed - it's so powerful! I can feel Sara's sweet and caring feelings for Kalu transform into their essence: animal lust and the desire to bear his seed. Beautiful.
-Erin
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