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Bereft by the road-side

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by Anonymous

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by annaswirls03/04/04

eyebrows

my eyebrows stayed furrowed this whole poem. this is a good thing, by the way. disturbed by intently interested

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by LeBroz01/20/07

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A rather dark one, seems more along the line of giving up, surrendering. Depressing thought.

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by duddle14602/08/07

Bereft

Visions of deep dark pools of sweet sadness.

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by tazz31707/13/12

UPON CHANGING MY THOUGHTS

will the outcome differ. TK U MLJ LV NV

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