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Razor Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/27/16

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Nice writing, but It's just a little to deep for me...

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by Anonymous03/27/16

deep...??

hell it's some of the most depressing prose I've ever read...

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by Anonymous03/28/16

If you or any one you loved ...

... had ever been near that deep dark place, perhaps you would better appreciate the beauty & fidelity of her prose. This chapter both comforts & encourages.

Thank You,
nthusiastic

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by sanser603/30/16

Fascinating reading

Mary is a strong woman with high ethical standards.
She has learned it the hard way. She is one of the millions of kids growing up knowing that they are not good enough for the people, who should care for them and love them unconditionally.
Mary looks out for others, but needs one to take care of her and love her.
I hope she finds that person.
Beautiful writing SSL.
Kramer

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by noel547405/27/16

a parent's love

Mary was looking for the love of her father
the same thing happens to boy/men who want/need the love of their mothers also,
this is great story, i have enjoyed the great insights so far into the emotional attributes that makeup every human and how we struggle daily to reign them in and live with them
thank you

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