All Comments on '10th Anniversary Ch. 01'

Oh my god! Please don't leave us hanging. That was so hot and I cant wait for chapter two. On our next anniversary I'd live for my wife to meet a "Tommy"!

First this Tommy was not in shape, I am military, and still have the skills, first choice you have ten mins too be miles away,second choice wife get the fuck up stairs now, third choice fuck it , with my straight blade knife,vthat I carry all the time,your life will be over so think about that next time you try to f****** married wife, I live in Kissimmee Florida come down here and try it, how to fuck is this erotic, but it's the husbands fault too, before the second rounds of drinks, she said let's leave, but auther, what resort doesn't use a server's, not worried about my wife, just not going too let punk talk shit. Just saying.

They spent the entire day in the sun? No water, no food, nothing then the wife goes from hating the guy to jumping in the sack with him?

How fucking old are you? 14? Because you sure as hell don't know how to write or how sex works. Go back to playing COD in your parents basement.

This is a simple story. She's simple, he's simple and Tommy's simple.

and stop picking on people when you haven't written a fucking thing. All you do is bitch and complain!!! and we're sick of your sorry ass writing.

All the subtlety of a sledge hammer. No tension, just some idiot trying to write a stroke story and failing miserably.

Not a particularly interesting story. The behaviors are out of character as you have written them, with only Tommy the young idiot with a big cock staying true to form. Just to be fair, I won't rate the story at all.

No Reality .Husband should of said what is your room number I will be back with a gun or go ahead my lawyer will call yours don't bother coming back home its over. Also this story is way out of reality. Most women take a while to be seduced. Most hate the kind of guy Tommy was and would of shut him down without a second thought

just go away asshole we know you're an old ugly fag pussy with no balls. 5 for a good LW story

brain killing writing.

moronic people at best

plot is "sexy wife cheats, always"

husband is at best nothing

What her brain turn off?

her cunt took over her body?

Like some one said, she has no room

she has no money, plane ticket, or id.

she also has no marriage

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Oh wait this is all past tense, it happened and it appears that hubby just rolled over like a good WACC.

She pick the opposite of hubby, with all the characteristics that she supposedly hated over hubby. She considered against, insulted, and emasculated him. Why would he keep her? What a worthless loser he is.

and to offset the asshole of LIT"s 1 vote as usual. If more of us did this maybe the fool would get the idea he can't win!

take your own advice cunt. What makes you think you're going to win bashing others? Not going to happen, unless all voting and comments are removed permanently. Maybe that wouldn't be such a bad idea, at least that would get rid of you. 1* for another piece of trash thrown into loving wives.

What are you doing in this category? Shouldn't you be over in the Lesbian category, munching away? Gave this a ONE STAR rating in honor of the whore of Lit, Bonny.

I guess I like stories that are more real. Hard to take seriously as what really would of happened. Like a comment made made by a military guy the kids life was going to get very painful real quick along with the wife's. Husband knows what college he goes to in there home town . Sounds like a baseball bat waiting for Tommy when he is getting ready to go to class when they get back. Want to make the story more interesting write a part 2 with the aftermath and consequences of what really happens to a relationship especially when kids are involved in a family.

So, is your name Tommy?? The way you wrote this story sure makes it seem like your the tommy character. This was written with all of his personality traits. What a bunch of garbage.

Well written.

The only problem...a real man would have had words with this asshole at the pool and then took his wife elsewhere, unless management interceded with the crass loud mouth.

Next, he finds his wife already sexually involved with the asshole and does nothing. Wife doesn't want to leave and wants to get sexed withthis guy so...where did he think he had a wife? He has a slut and now...if he stays married - he has a Hot Wife cheater and a slut.

This guy is a spineless cuck. Would he get balls and take his wife back in another chapter. Give me a break, he has already let her closet slut out, she's a slut and he is a spineless wimp...wimps don't change - they run away!

Anyway, only 2nd chapter outine...a cuck is born and a Hot Wife enjoys her new gang bang lifestyle.

I gave you a three, only because you started out suggesting he was a man and ended up changing him to a wimp. The fact that his wife is/was a closet slut...oh well!

reading and sucking cocks is your main event and joy in life since your wife left your sorry ass for a real man!! BTW asshole of LIT, I gave this my big old 5.

You annony dumbass comments are useless, Gave this a 5 to help the score nothing else but to offset the asshole of LIT! Go suck another cock asshole

There could have been an interesting story here if it had a little more finesse. As it stands, there is simply no explanation for either the husband's or wife's actions. Maybe the next chapter can be a "prequel" that explains it all? That's the only way I can see this story being saved.

By the way, please delete any comments by Bonnie/Vastie and anyone who responds to him/her. That's the only way these people will go away. I can't imagine the amount of energy it must take for them to cut and paste the same garbage on every story posted to this site every day.

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT FAT DUMB WHORE VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

for effort and content and to offset the asshole of LIT"s 1 vote!!

Once again, you keep posting those words, though it's clear you don't have a fucking clue what they really mean.

Nothing in the background suggests that they are swingers. Nothing suggests the wife is a cheater. So right in front of her husband you want us to believe she sucks some loud mouth jerk off? Even for fiction that was simply ludicrous. Both the wife actions and the husbands non actions. I think hubby simply kicked lover boy in the face, took his wife and left. Packed up and went home and divorced the slut. Awful, unbelievable story.

I would've gone to the bar for three beers and gone back to smash two of them over his head them pour the third over my future ex wife's head. Would never allow myself to be disrespected it any way . Married with kids or just someone being that badly disrespectful.

Once again, the people in your story are 100% completely mentally unstable. There is NO reason for the readers to buy into any of this. Is is just crap. Another author that gets of on being bettered by another man, another author with gay desires that they can't deal with directly, so they pretend that a bigger cock taking their women won't appear to be obviously gay...monkeytail10103 you say you're over 40??? isn't it time for you to grow the fuck-up??? Get out, suck some cocks and stop wasting everyone's time by using this board as your outlet.

I seriously doubt that there will be an 11th anniversary. Would you? Hey monkeytail this is a real mess.Believe it or not people really don't act like this even in fantasy.

Wife sucking a new energetic cock in front of husband and that's on their anniversary is very inspiring experience. And later calling him to room to gget properly fucked

I hope my wife do such thing and later sit on mouth to feed me the combined cum

That wouldn't happen in a hundred years. If that was my wife, my foot would have been so far up her snatch, it would have taken a surgeon to get it out. After he did, I would bury it in her ass as I threw her out the door.

Please don't write anymore, you give mankind a bad name.

First the loud mouth asshole, then the cunt that calls herself a wife and finally the dipshit that wrote it.

Ten-year wedding anniversary, and now heading for divorce lawyer....!

then again a man would not do it, only a little boy would. 1*

What a little punk story, yuck.

How can you redeem this story without making the husband into a wimp.....he allows the wife to leave with another and she goes not only willingly, but with great anticipation....no marriage here, no love for the husband, only lust and disrespect! Unless you plan some significant consequences for this ultimate betrayal then this story just becomes another one of the cuckold fetish stories which seem to dominate Loving Wifes lately. I know, it is your story, you can do what you want, we don't have to read it, but unfortunately, we have already read it and it is stuck in our minds. Need a mind wipe unless you can somehow redeem it in chapter 2.

As @tazz317 says: there won't be a 11th anniversary!!! A bad story, with characters changing their way 180º...This woman doesn't have only a thought to her children, to her family...This is part 1, so I hope the husband sees this marriage is over, get back home immediately and start the divorce the next day...1*

Why he didn't just leave when he came back is beyond me...

Either that or beat the shit out of the guy...

Tired of reading this kind of craps making the husband into a wimp. I think by the other reviews everyone is saying the same thing. This a story i wish i never would of read. Just way to much shit about a big Dick. My wife told me its exciting at first but when compassion and caring come in all it is a big dick and you get nothing what a woman really craves in a true relationship. Mr college boy in real life would get the shit beat out of him with a married woman. Sorry author 99 percent of men are not wimps and there would be he'll to pay if that was my wife.

I was going to give this the 1 star I usually give cuck stories, but since this is labelled chapter 1, I'll give it the benefit of the doubt till I see what happens in later chapters.

That said, I have several comments:

Despite her mouthed "Sorry", at implying this is a first, I don't believe that she hasn't already been cheating on him. You don't go from ten year faithful wife to cock-sucking size queen overnight!

Giving her the benefit of the doubt for the moment, HIS actions baffle me:

First, there is NO way I would have left them alone a second time. If they weren't going back to their room, I would have sent HER for the next round, an while she was gone, tell Tommy boy that it was time to join his friends and find a playmate his own age.

Second, when he DID go for drinks and came back to find them both with their pants off, if he wanted to stay with her he should have told her to put some clothes on and come back to the room with him. If she didn't I would have gone back to the room, packed them BOTH up, dump her stuff in a dumpster, check the BOTH out and headed to the airport. Then I would have cancelled her ticket and changed mine to the earliest flight I could get. Either then, if I had time, or when I got home I'd cancel all cards that I could, change the locks and throw out all her stuff (selling anything, like jewelry with any value), and make an appointment with a lawyer!

I CERTAINLY wouldn't have stood there while she sucked him off, smiled while she ran her hands over his body, and announced that she was taking him back to her (OUR!) room without even looking at me!

After looking at your other stories, I have ZERO hope that you will give this husband a set of balls, so I'm going to save time by giving this the 1 star that is far more than it deserves. I with there was a zero or negative rating we could give!

And I agree, cuckold should be in Fetish!

I threw the drink in my wife's face.

Go ahead fuck her punk. I left back to the room, came back with my knife and castrated him on the spot. It was a bloody mess, but hey it's just a story... I handed my wife his balls and the knife said keep them dear but don't come home.

What a great anniversary present. Love young super sized cock. xoxoxox Annette

We need a lot more stories like this in the LW category. It sure beats the hell out of those boring 5 or more page novels that we see far too much of. I can hardly wait for the next chapter when she gets fucked by her first nine inch cock and hubby loves watching and hopefully participating. But please, no cream pie or cock sucking by the husband in the next chapter...just a husband sharing his wife please.

I must agree with the majority of comments of a poorly written thought out story.

After reluctantly reading this story I felt disappointed to find that this is another cuckold story in the mix. I am like many men here and wouldn't put up with the kid's behavior or that of the wife. She would be divorced and left behind with no place to go. Oh here's a thought she could shack up at the kid's dorm and have more cocks to suck and fuck and be a total slut.

1*

Great work! Please post a next part!

Until it went crazy. Ya really think she would deep throat a monster cock, especially after already havinf drained the drunk? Then u think he'd be able to screw her? Superman, huh?

2

Where have all the good writers gone? This category is becoming the dumping ground for trash writers. How about an erotic story next time, if you're capable of writing one.

Gave it a ONE in honor of that lesbian bonnietaylor2. Have you had your fur burger for today yet?

Eagerly awaiting chapter 2!!

I wish you had put more build up on the front of it. It seems like Jill was just ready to jump on young stud's cock. No inner conflict within her? That would have made it better. And I always like the drawing attention to the wedding rings in these types of stories. Not really fan of cuckold stories, but I enjoyed this one.

Good spelling, but poor punctuation, especially using commas where they are needed.

5 *'s and looking forward to where this is going. Since young stud is going to college in their home town, this could continue on past the anniversary.

That fucking idiot would get his due and her ass would be so screwed.

That was a very hot story I would love to see my wife get fucked like that any chance you would be interested In meeting my wife and fuck her like the women in this story if so here's our email orgasmdonar247@gmail.com

Sorry, there was nothing erotic about this story. Nobody, but nobody can be as stupid as the characters you described. Come on, willing cuckolds are not erotic. Only the scum of the earth that troll these stories would think so.

Yuck another shit writer that caters to the unwashed. ONE star.

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote!!

gave you a 5

Any -8* performance can get

To those of you who read the entire thing (despite having a pretty good idea what the subject matter was), I have only one thing to say... you're a waste of a human being. I mean, how pathetic can you be to waste your OWN time reading something you can't stand and THEN spend even MORE time writing a negative comment. I know this isn't your typical Backwoods Sex with Mama category, so sorry you got lost... but you may want to grab the can of Bud, hop in your jacked up pickup and go crash into a pole.

Save the planet. Spare humanity your life.

Fucking idiots. lol

Great story. Well told. Keep it coming.

What a really bad story...alas, there is no zero star.

Does your mother know your telling stories about her?

I hate,cuck stories

Getting rather tired of the big cock stories. It is a tired cliche' at best. As a sex therapist and a male slut myself I have met a few size queens. I have known more women who hated too much size. Depending on the woman it could be fairly smile and a tilted cervix. The most important sex organ is the brain. If a woman thinks a big one will make her love it more so it does. And mostly the opposite too. So in this story that the woman throws over years of marriage for a fuck with a big dick is just bad writing. Then to make the big dick contemptuous of others making him worthy of contempt so as to make her new choices even more incompatible with the background for her. quick fucks happen but not this way. A 2

Total crap. No loving wife here. just kill yourself and make the world a better place!

hey hubby! ya just gonna stand there ??? least ya could do is kick her out, go home with out her and throw her stuff out on the lawn and divorce her or at least leave her- ya get a 2

Are you? This is straight comic book.

In some's world this might be entertaining and titalating, but not mine. Today might have been the "10 th." Wedding anniversary, but after this "little show"; she wouldn't have to worry about an 11 th. No, let her have her "BIG COCK" asshole take care of her. I would pack my bags, get on the first flight home after cleaning out her cash, grabbing her cell phone, and taking her ID and credit cards with me and cancelling her return voucher home for her ticket. While I was waiting, I would call my attorney and set up a consult as soon as possible on my return to get the ball rolling on the divorce. For me, everything has a cost; and the cost of her actions would be painful, thorough, expensive, and complete; by the time I got done costing her everything she held near and dear. A sickening tale about a cold and selfish person, in case you wondered, this hit way too close to home for me.

cuck shit.

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Fuck you in the heart dear annony! You old ugly fat ED fag!!

in honor of that whore of Lit bonnietaylor2, better known as bonny/vasty/anon, winner of the 2015 Asshole of the Year Award

What can you expect 5" and slim against 9" and fat, no contest.

It certainly isnt for my wife.

I also note that she didnt suck hubby off too often and never swallowed, and she expects her husband to beleive she hasnt had a big cock before.... Ha fucking ha!

THE HUSBAN HAS NO BALLS HE SHOULD KICK THAT MOTHER IN HIS BIG BALLSSEND HIM INTO THE HOT TUB AND DROWN HIS ASS ALONG WITH THE SLUT WIFE AND MAKE SHORETHAT THEY BOTH DIE FUCK THAT SCUM BAG BITCH AND THAT BIG DICK WHORE.

I guess she doesn't much appreciate his FAT WALLET enough.

Grab the plane tickets, check out & fly home. Let lover boy take care of her.

What about this shit is supposed to be erotic, yuck.

The attorney's office. Bye

I agree with the other comments, if the wife is willing to do that with the younger guy, than more power to her!! Hubby seems a wimp anyway.

If he wasn't such a wimp, he ought to have said to his wife come out with me now or don't bother coming home, if you do divorce papers will be waiting for your signature. I'll be leaving on the next plane.

by a dumb ass excuse for a writer.

First 9999 out of 10000 guys would of gone down swinging, win or lose. Divorce definitely after she sucked his cock. Hope we hear more about fucking his friend mother. I know only one guy at around 22 that was married and allowed his wife get picked up in a bar. She fucked some college guy who got drafted that day . A 6'4" 294 pound black DE. The guy gucked her all night in his hotel room in the ass and all . He walked out , couldn't watch anymore. That morning before she got home her threw all her stuff out of their apt window. Cleaned the bank accounts out and had her served a few days later. She begged forgiveness but he couldn't forgive. Also the mom getting fucked is not so rare but very hot

Ok..just give me a few minutes to get my stuff from the room and I'll get home to start the divorce. Don't

Yes, he's a wimp, but if that whip all of a sudden grew some balls and made her pay, you'd be the first one crying a river how cruel he is. You guys are hypocrites.

So full of themselves with so much to prove. Love it when they prove it with me. Xoxoxo Annette

wimpy cuck shit.

Slut wife... Boring....

What a massive waste of time.

The writing is good. The temptation of a faithful wife and the resulting emotions are a proven hook on this site. However, this is simply not how real women behave. We men have been misled to believe that simply waving a big dick will have them falling all over themselves wanting to bang us. Just doesn't happen that way in real life. The vast majority of women need a better reason than that.

. . . hot!

Damn that's a hot story. May have to put it to film for my members.

....and it’s time for hubby to go find himself a girl without a checkered past.

Going to her room... hmmm. I’m surprised she didn’t want to go to his room and take on all the college boyz.

Well, anyway, hubby should go back there, just long enough to get his wallet and keys and slip out as wifey gets busy with her new toy.

Then he can drive home, get his shit together, drain the accounts and move on.

He needn’t worry about wifey. She’ll party on until Spring Break is over and all the kiddies go home, but she’ll get the house in the end, so no big.....

It’s just better this way. No self respecting man wants a whore or a slut for a wife. It’s unhealthy, risky......and just plain shitty.

Have you ever thought of writing something original? It’s harder, but much more worthwhile. Rehashing this cuckold shit has been so overdone, it’s a bad joke in last months newspaper (which nobody reads anymore, anyway).

I would have to say, " she is my soon to be ex wife, so knock yourself out. "

With an unbelievable wife, used as a prop for his humiliation. Poor idea.

You peopme must be incredibly stupid or deprived of basic human sense to think something like this would be erotic or stimulating though I've no doubt there ate fools out there that would do this. This is nothing but a degrading story thrown at the male .any true man would have beaten the young lad to.an inch of his life. Any real wife would have left the hot tub and for you stupid morons out there..size does NOT generally turn a woman on nor does it enchant or put them in a stupor.

I feel bad for those who cant decipher reality from fiction

Not even going to finish.

I had to read this total shite.....ffs who writes this crap

No way on earth this drivel scored 3.87 unless marks were doctored.

JJ

I had a friend of mine that used to fuck my wife often,one night he suggested we all go to a friends house for a swim in there Indore pool.After being in the pool for about an hour two more of his friends turned up. Some time later one of his friends came onto my wife, and finished up fucking my wife in the pool in front of everyone of course after getting my approval by nodding my head.That finished up being a great night had by all.

Grow some spine

I'll write it for you in a single paragraph. After wifey and loud mouth finished, I headed back to our room, packed my bags and left for the airport. I shut off my phone and booked the earliest flight home. Once there I dropped everything and headed for my attorney's office to file for divorce.

Looks like wifey has become a victim of new world math: 9 inches > 10 years.

Haters will always hate. Hot story

Was this story written by a ten year old as it's absolute crap.

Another cuck wanna be. You deserve to lose her, maybe you should suck his dick too. Sad so many males aren’t anymore