10th Anniversary Ch. 01

Oh my god! Please don't leave us hanging. That was so hot and I cant wait for chapter two. On our next anniversary I'd live for my wife to meet a "Tommy"!

three choices

First this Tommy was not in shape, I am military, and still have the skills, first choice you have ten mins too be miles away,second choice wife get the fuck up stairs now, third choice fuck it , with my straight blade knife,vthat I carry all the time,your life will be over so think about that next time you try to f****** married wife, I live in Kissimmee Florida come down here and try it, how to fuck is this erotic, but it's the husbands fault too, before the second rounds of drinks, she said let's leave, but auther, what resort doesn't use a server's, not worried about my wife, just not going too let punk talk shit. Just saying.

Piece of shit story.

They spent the entire day in the sun? No water, no food, nothing then the wife goes from hating the guy to jumping in the sack with him?

How fucking old are you? 14? Because you sure as hell don't know how to write or how sex works. Go back to playing COD in your parents basement.

Simple

This is a simple story. She's simple, he's simple and Tommy's simple.

Eat shit annony you old ugly fag

and stop picking on people when you haven't written a fucking thing. All you do is bitch and complain!!! and we're sick of your sorry ass writing.

More like monkeybrain

All the subtlety of a sledge hammer. No tension, just some idiot trying to write a stroke story and failing miserably.

Not a particularly interesting story. The behaviors are out of character as you have written them, with only Tommy the young idiot with a big cock staying true to form. Just to be fair, I won't rate the story at all.

Really

No Reality .Husband should of said what is your room number I will be back with a gun or go ahead my lawyer will call yours don't bother coming back home its over. Also this story is way out of reality. Most women take a while to be seduced. Most hate the kind of guy Tommy was and would of shut him down without a second thought

yea like you did dear annony when you found out your wife was fucking the fleet!!!

just go away asshole we know you're an old ugly fag pussy with no balls. 5 for a good LW story

brain killing writing.
moronic people at best
plot is "sexy wife cheats, always"
husband is at best nothing

So she wanted to show hubby that she has always been a slut?

What her brain turn off?
her cunt took over her body?
Like some one said, she has no room
she has no money, plane ticket, or id.
she also has no marriage
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Oh wait this is all past tense, it happened and it appears that hubby just rolled over like a good WACC.
She pick the opposite of hubby, with all the characteristics that she supposedly hated over hubby. She considered against, insulted, and emasculated him. Why would he keep her? What a worthless loser he is.

5 for agood effort and content

and to offset the asshole of LIT"s 1 vote as usual. If more of us did this maybe the fool would get the idea he can't win!

I DO NOT SEE #11 IN THEIR FUTURE

but a prison term is likely. TK U MLJ LV NV

re:bonnietaylor

take your own advice cunt. What makes you think you're going to win bashing others? Not going to happen, unless all voting and comments are removed permanently. Maybe that wouldn't be such a bad idea, at least that would get rid of you. 1* for another piece of trash thrown into loving wives.

Bonny/Vasty

What are you doing in this category? Shouldn't you be over in the Lesbian category, munching away? Gave this a ONE STAR rating in honor of the whore of Lit, Bonny.

This husband stupid

I guess I like stories that are more real. Hard to take seriously as what really would of happened. Like a comment made made by a military guy the kids life was going to get very painful real quick along with the wife's. Husband knows what college he goes to in there home town . Sounds like a baseball bat waiting for Tommy when he is getting ready to go to class when they get back. Want to make the story more interesting write a part 2 with the aftermath and consequences of what really happens to a relationship especially when kids are involved in a family.

So.....Is your Name???

So, is your name Tommy?? The way you wrote this story sure makes it seem like your the tommy character. This was written with all of his personality traits. What a bunch of garbage.

It's ALL Over Now - CUCK!

Well written.
The only problem...a real man would have had words with this asshole at the pool and then took his wife elsewhere, unless management interceded with the crass loud mouth.
Next, he finds his wife already sexually involved with the asshole and does nothing. Wife doesn't want to leave and wants to get sexed withthis guy so...where did he think he had a wife? He has a slut and now...if he stays married - he has a Hot Wife cheater and a slut.

This guy is a spineless cuck. Would he get balls and take his wife back in another chapter. Give me a break, he has already let her closet slut out, she's a slut and he is a spineless wimp...wimps don't change - they run away!

Anyway, only 2nd chapter outine...a cuck is born and a Hot Wife enjoys her new gang bang lifestyle.

I gave you a three, only because you started out suggesting he was a man and ended up changing him to a wimp. The fact that his wife is/was a closet slut...oh well!

I was think ing dear annony the same thing, you should be in the gay sections

reading and sucking cocks is your main event and joy in life since your wife left your sorry ass for a real man!! BTW asshole of LIT, I gave this my big old 5.

Ionly bsh you asshole of LIT

You annony dumbass comments are useless, Gave this a 5 to help the score nothing else but to offset the asshole of LIT! Go suck another cock asshole

Meh

There could have been an interesting story here if it had a little more finesse. As it stands, there is simply no explanation for either the husband's or wife's actions. Maybe the next chapter can be a "prequel" that explains it all? That's the only way I can see this story being saved.

By the way, please delete any comments by Bonnie/Vastie and anyone who responds to him/her. That's the only way these people will go away. I can't imagine the amount of energy it must take for them to cut and paste the same garbage on every story posted to this site every day.

1*

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT FAT DUMB WHORE VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

5

for effort and content and to offset the asshole of LIT"s 1 vote!!

re: 5 for effort and conten

Once again, you keep posting those words, though it's clear you don't have a fucking clue what they really mean.

And the husband just stood there?

Nothing in the background suggests that they are swingers. Nothing suggests the wife is a cheater. So right in front of her husband you want us to believe she sucks some loud mouth jerk off? Even for fiction that was simply ludicrous. Both the wife actions and the husbands non actions. I think hubby simply kicked lover boy in the face, took his wife and left. Packed up and went home and divorced the slut. Awful, unbelievable story.

I would've gone to the bar for three beers and gone back to smash two of them over his head them pour the third over my future ex wife's head. Would never allow myself to be disrespected it any way . Married with kids or just someone being that badly disrespectful.

Complete garbage.

Once again, the people in your story are 100% completely mentally unstable. There is NO reason for the readers to buy into any of this. Is is just crap. Another author that gets of on being bettered by another man, another author with gay desires that they can't deal with directly, so they pretend that a bigger cock taking their women won't appear to be obviously gay...monkeytail10103 you say you're over 40??? isn't it time for you to grow the fuck-up??? Get out, suck some cocks and stop wasting everyone's time by using this board as your outlet.

The Only Positive in This Mess is.....

I seriously doubt that there will be an 11th anniversary. Would you? Hey monkeytail this is a real mess.Believe it or not people really don't act like this even in fantasy.

It's very inspiring

Wife sucking a new energetic cock in front of husband and that's on their anniversary is very inspiring experience. And later calling him to room to gget properly fucked
I hope my wife do such thing and later sit on mouth to feed me the combined cum

Totally not to be believed.

That wouldn't happen in a hundred years. If that was my wife, my foot would have been so far up her snatch, it would have taken a surgeon to get it out. After he did, I would bury it in her ass as I threw her out the door.

Just utter crap

Please don't write anymore, you give mankind a bad name.

Shoot

First the loud mouth asshole, then the cunt that calls herself a wife and finally the dipshit that wrote it.

Wedding anniversary

Ten-year wedding anniversary, and now heading for divorce lawyer....!

never understood why a man would stand by and let his wife be a slut

then again a man would not do it, only a little boy would. 1*

you got to be gay.

What a little punk story, yuck.

What Now...a Wimp Cuckold?

How can you redeem this story without making the husband into a wimp.....he allows the wife to leave with another and she goes not only willingly, but with great anticipation....no marriage here, no love for the husband, only lust and disrespect! Unless you plan some significant consequences for this ultimate betrayal then this story just becomes another one of the cuckold fetish stories which seem to dominate Loving Wifes lately. I know, it is your story, you can do what you want, we don't have to read it, but unfortunately, we have already read it and it is stuck in our minds. Need a mind wipe unless you can somehow redeem it in chapter 2.

As @tazz317 says...

As @tazz317 says: there won't be a 11th anniversary!!! A bad story, with characters changing their way 180º...This woman doesn't have only a thought to her children, to her family...This is part 1, so I hope the husband sees this marriage is over, get back home immediately and start the divorce the next day...1*

WTF

Why he didn't just leave when he came back is beyond me...
Either that or beat the shit out of the guy...

I wll wait if part 2 comes out to see the reviews first

Tired of reading this kind of craps making the husband into a wimp. I think by the other reviews everyone is saying the same thing. This a story i wish i never would of read. Just way to much shit about a big Dick. My wife told me its exciting at first but when compassion and caring come in all it is a big dick and you get nothing what a woman really craves in a true relationship. Mr college boy in real life would get the shit beat out of him with a married woman. Sorry author 99 percent of men are not wimps and there would be he'll to pay if that was my wife.

Ugh!

I was going to give this the 1 star I usually give cuck stories, but since this is labelled chapter 1, I'll give it the benefit of the doubt till I see what happens in later chapters.

That said, I have several comments:

Despite her mouthed "Sorry", at implying this is a first, I don't believe that she hasn't already been cheating on him. You don't go from ten year faithful wife to cock-sucking size queen overnight!

Giving her the benefit of the doubt for the moment, HIS actions baffle me:

First, there is NO way I would have left them alone a second time. If they weren't going back to their room, I would have sent HER for the next round, an while she was gone, tell Tommy boy that it was time to join his friends and find a playmate his own age.

Second, when he DID go for drinks and came back to find them both with their pants off, if he wanted to stay with her he should have told her to put some clothes on and come back to the room with him. If she didn't I would have gone back to the room, packed them BOTH up, dump her stuff in a dumpster, check the BOTH out and headed to the airport. Then I would have cancelled her ticket and changed mine to the earliest flight I could get. Either then, if I had time, or when I got home I'd cancel all cards that I could, change the locks and throw out all her stuff (selling anything, like jewelry with any value), and make an appointment with a lawyer!

I CERTAINLY wouldn't have stood there while she sucked him off, smiled while she ran her hands over his body, and announced that she was taking him back to her (OUR!) room without even looking at me!

One Star

After looking at your other stories, I have ZERO hope that you will give this husband a set of balls, so I'm going to save time by giving this the 1 star that is far more than it deserves. I with there was a zero or negative rating we could give!

And I agree, cuckold should be in Fetish!

WACC

I threw the drink in my wife's face.
Go ahead fuck her punk. I left back to the room, came back with my knife and castrated him on the spot. It was a bloody mess, but hey it's just a story... I handed my wife his balls and the knife said keep them dear but don't come home.

Great anniversary present

What a great anniversary present. Love young super sized cock. xoxoxox Annette

Great story 5* .

We need a lot more stories like this in the LW category. It sure beats the hell out of those boring 5 or more page novels that we see far too much of. I can hardly wait for the next chapter when she gets fucked by her first nine inch cock and hubby loves watching and hopefully participating. But please, no cream pie or cock sucking by the husband in the next chapter...just a husband sharing his wife please.

Really Another Cuckold

I must agree with the majority of comments of a poorly written thought out story.
After reluctantly reading this story I felt disappointed to find that this is another cuckold story in the mix. I am like many men here and wouldn't put up with the kid's behavior or that of the wife. She would be divorced and left behind with no place to go. Oh here's a thought she could shack up at the kid's dorm and have more cocks to suck and fuck and be a total slut.

Pure Crap

1*

Hot story please keep going

Great work! Please post a next part!

pretty good

Until it went crazy. Ya really think she would deep throat a monster cock, especially after already havinf drained the drunk? Then u think he'd be able to screw her? Superman, huh?
2

trash, pure trash

Where have all the good writers gone? This category is becoming the dumping ground for trash writers. How about an erotic story next time, if you're capable of writing one.
Gave it a ONE in honor of that lesbian bonnietaylor2. Have you had your fur burger for today yet?

#2

Eagerly awaiting chapter 2!!