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10th Anniversary Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by honeylicker112403/28/16

Great story...but...

I wish you had put more build up on the front of it. It seems like Jill was just ready to jump on young stud's cock. No inner conflict within her? That would have made it better. And I always like the drawing attention to the wedding rings in these types of stories. Not really fan of cuckold stories, but I enjoyed this one.

Good spelling, but poor punctuation, especially using commas where they are needed.

5 *'s and looking forward to where this is going. Since young stud is going to college in their home town, this could continue on past the anniversary.

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by Anonymous03/28/16

The bitch would be fucked by the damn divorce!!

That fucking idiot would get his due and her ass would be so screwed.

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by Anonymous03/28/16

my wife

That was a very hot story I would love to see my wife get fucked like that any chance you would be interested In meeting my wife and fuck her like the women in this story if so here's our email orgasmdonar247@gmail.com

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by Anonymous03/28/16

1*

Sorry, there was nothing erotic about this story. Nobody, but nobody can be as stupid as the characters you described. Come on, willing cuckolds are not erotic. Only the scum of the earth that troll these stories would think so.

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by Anonymous03/28/16

pure cuckold trash

Yuck another shit writer that caters to the unwashed. ONE star.

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by vastiesmith203/28/16

5

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote!!

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by vastiesmith203/28/16

Loved the story

gave you a 5

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by Anonymous03/28/16

As horrible as

Any -8* performance can get

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Great Story. Fuck the Anonymous Trolls.

To those of you who read the entire thing (despite having a pretty good idea what the subject matter was), I have only one thing to say... you're a waste of a human being. I mean, how pathetic can you be to waste your OWN time reading something you can't stand and THEN spend even MORE time writing a negative comment. I know this isn't your typical Backwoods Sex with Mama category, so sorry you got lost... but you may want to grab the can of Bud, hop in your jacked up pickup and go crash into a pole.

Save the planet. Spare humanity your life.

Fucking idiots. lol

Great story. Well told. Keep it coming.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

hope he dumps the cunt

What a really bad story...alas, there is no zero star.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

So she sees a big cock, and suddenly becomes a whore?

Does your mother know your telling stories about her?

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by Anonymous03/29/16

cuck story

I hate,cuck stories

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Hhhhhmmmmmm...

Well, I read the story all the way though. If you are into being a cuck then maybe this story is for you. I was hoping he was going to take the kid out - permanently. I've been married for over 20 years to a wonderful woman who can't hold her liquor and still rates an 8 or more on the looks and body scale. I have, over the years, had to enforce my marital status on intoxicated and/or boorish men who thought they could take liberties. I have found that those persons not respecting the boundaries of marriage only deserve what they get. Usually it is a quick slap to the Adam's Apple and it is all over with. Twice I have warned people not to get back up and it unfortunately went further (much to the horror of my wife who now only has one drink and switches to soda). It is a scary side of me that she never knew existed and neither of us like. The islands, Carnival cruises, and some beaches in Florida seem to invite the rakish behavior that young college age or young military guys portray. Usually the military guys back down. They are taught to respect others (alcohol not withstanding) and if a reminder doesn't work I show them my military I.D. card and once they see the rank it usually clears their heads and changes their minds. Ever see a drunk try to stand at attention and salute? It is hilarious! The college aged guys? Let's just say I am glad I have kept in shape and still teach judo to women and children for defense. By the way, I don't drink Bud, do drive a Denali pickup, and do respect another man's territory.

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by shaman4303/31/16

Not original at all

Getting rather tired of the big cock stories. It is a tired cliche' at best. As a sex therapist and a male slut myself I have met a few size queens. I have known more women who hated too much size. Depending on the woman it could be fairly smile and a tilted cervix. The most important sex organ is the brain. If a woman thinks a big one will make her love it more so it does. And mostly the opposite too. So in this story that the woman throws over years of marriage for a fuck with a big dick is just bad writing. Then to make the big dick contemptuous of others making him worthy of contempt so as to make her new choices even more incompatible with the background for her. quick fucks happen but not this way. A 2

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by Anonymous04/02/16

Just another heartless CUNT wife and a faggot sissy husband

Total crap. No loving wife here. just kill yourself and make the world a better place!

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by Anonymous04/03/16

thats it????

hey hubby! ya just gonna stand there ??? least ya could do is kick her out, go home with out her and throw her stuff out on the lawn and divorce her or at least leave her- ya get a 2

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by Sigint04/03/16

You're Not Proud of This

Are you? This is straight comic book.

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by Anonymous04/07/16

Well

In some's world this might be entertaining and titalating, but not mine. Today might have been the "10 th." Wedding anniversary, but after this "little show"; she wouldn't have to worry about an 11 th. No, let her have her "BIG COCK" asshole take care of her. I would pack my bags, get on the first flight home after cleaning out her cash, grabbing her cell phone, and taking her ID and credit cards with me and cancelling her return voucher home for her ticket. While I was waiting, I would call my attorney and set up a consult as soon as possible on my return to get the ball rolling on the divorce. For me, everything has a cost; and the cost of her actions would be painful, thorough, expensive, and complete; by the time I got done costing her everything she held near and dear. A sickening tale about a cold and selfish person, in case you wondered, this hit way too close to home for me.

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by Anonymous04/13/16

1*

cuck shit.

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by bonnietaylor204/13/16

5

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Fuck you in the heart dear annony! You old ugly fat ED fag!!

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by Anonymous04/15/16

1*

in honor of that whore of Lit bonnietaylor2, better known as bonny/vasty/anon, winner of the 2015 Asshole of the Year Award

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by suckerman05/07/16

great story

What can you expect 5" and slim against 9" and fat, no contest.
It certainly isnt for my wife.
I also note that she didnt suck hubby off too often and never swallowed, and she expects her husband to beleive she hasnt had a big cock before.... Ha fucking ha!

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by Anonymous05/19/16

THE HUSBAN HAS NO BALLS HE SHOULD KICK THAT MOTHER IN HIS BIG BALLSSEND HIM INTO THE HOT TUB AND DROWN HIS ASS ALONG WITH THE SLUT WIFE AND MAKE SHORETHAT THEY BOTH DIE FUCK THAT SCUM BAG BITCH AND THAT BIG DICK WHORE.

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by ErotFan09/08/16

@suckerman

I guess she doesn't much appreciate his FAT WALLET enough.

Grab the plane tickets, check out & fly home. Let lover boy take care of her.

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by Anonymous09/22/16

So you are a pathic loser and married a slut.

What about this shit is supposed to be erotic, yuck.

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by Anonymous10/10/16

See you at

The attorney's office. Bye

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by Anonymous12/03/16

It is a great story

I agree with the other comments, if the wife is willing to do that with the younger guy, than more power to her!! Hubby seems a wimp anyway.

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by Anonymous02/11/17

Wimp

If he wasn't such a wimp, he ought to have said to his wife come out with me now or don't bother coming home, if you do divorce papers will be waiting for your signature. I'll be leaving on the next plane.

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