He bit a big chunk out of her and left her bleeding on the ground. Really stupid story
I am not sure I understand. He didn't leave her bleeding, she left him beaten. PS: This was my first story here, and I'd appreciate constructive criticism so I can post better work in the future. Thanks a lot.
...of course. What woman wouldn't want to be able to do this to such an asshole. If more women were trained like this, there would be very few rapes.
Nice story. It would have been nice if she had took his pants off him too and left him there naked.
Yes, it would, but given the setting, it did not seem like something she would do. But once she has him in her grip, in a more intimate setting, I'm sure she's going to torment him in more ways than one. :)
I think she should make him wear à dress!
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Kiss it?
He bit a big chunk out of her and left her bleeding on the ground. Really stupid story
I am sorry?
I am not sure I understand. He didn't leave her bleeding, she left him beaten.
PS: This was my first story here, and I'd appreciate constructive criticism so I can post better work in the future.
Thanks a lot.
Wishful thinking
...of course. What woman wouldn't want to be able to do this to such an asshole. If more women were trained like this, there would be very few rapes.
Promising start to writing
Nice story. It would have been nice if she had took his pants off him too and left him there naked.
Thank you
Yes, it would, but given the setting, it did not seem like something she would do. But once she has him in her grip, in a more intimate setting, I'm sure she's going to torment him in more ways than one. :)
Dress up time
I think she should make him wear à dress!
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