The story made this act of incest very romantic. I gave it a 4, but I wished there was a 4 1/2!
Thanks. No porn, just feelings that arouse the soul instead of body! :) Look forward to read more of you. Carlo, Milano
Beautifully written but might have been even better with the last 8 or at least the last 5 paragraphs omitted.Having tuned up your readers imaginations so effectively the additional explanation was a bit superfluous.
Freedom at its best!
And boring. *
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Very touching
The story made this act of incest very romantic. I gave it a 4, but I wished there was a 4 1/2!
Very quiet, very good.
Thanks.
No porn, just feelings that arouse the soul instead of body!
:)
Look forward to read more of you.
Carlo, Milano
Sex in the mind
Beautifully written but might have been even better with the last 8 or at least the last 5 paragraphs omitted.Having tuned up your readers imaginations so effectively the additional explanation was a bit superfluous.
Needs a few more chapters
Freedom at its best!
Wow that sucked
And boring. *
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