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Robin's Journey Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/04/16

Really?

The first line of a story, posted on an erotic website, "There is no sex here, this is merely setting the stage for future chapters". Sure made me want to read it.

You are a fairly good writer but have a misguided understanding of erotic writing.

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by Anonymous04/04/16

Great start!

Anon obviously has simple tastes. I much prefer a slow build to a quicki. Looking forward to more great chapters!

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