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10th Anniversary Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/29/16

She's about to be single in the future.

Videotape the shit and kick the bitch to the curb. Hell I's even leave her ass there.

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by elling5003/29/16

The third option

Get out of a marriage with such an insensitive woman. She just care about herself and her pleasures, and not her husbands emotions. Not a basis for a lasting relationship.

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by Brewtoo03/29/16

Disgusting Wimp

That's guy's a disgusting wimp and he should just kill himself and then this miserable story will end.l

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Turnabout Is Fair Play

Tell wifey you're glad she likes the idea of an open marriage and you're going to find yiourself someone to fuck on a regular basis. Yahoo!

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by screwher03/29/16

Thanks

Thanks for chapter 2 in such a quick fashion. I throughly enjoyed chapter 1. I re read it multiple times in anticipation of part two. I couldn't wait until tommy got his wife up to the room and fucked her. It didn't disappoint. The husbands inner conflict only enhanced the sex his wife was enjoying. I can't wait for chapter 3!

I must admit. This is how I want my wife spending our next anniversary.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

What´s the point of this story?

Totally irrational plot.Why he didn't just go and let her there?I would be cutting my losses and bye.He is not a willing cuckold, but is not reacting at the same time.You could put him in heavy drugs, that's the only way I can see a husband acting like him.Unbelievable story.Sorry.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

So The Wife Just Suddenly Turns Into a Zombie Cock Monster?

How fucking stupid is this? Come out of moms basement author.She has sex with a boy and all.of a.sudden treats her husband like something on the bottom of her shoe? Idiocy personified.Time for hubby to move on and dump the cunt

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by Anonymous03/29/16

get her out of your system

basically she just told you that you do not satisfy her get your wallet out the door go home disconnect all the credit cards phones take the kids and leave then you have her out of your system and you and the kids are out of her system that's her choice

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by Anonymous03/29/16

1*

more cuck shit.

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by Harddaysknight03/29/16

For many readers, this type of story

is the least popular on the site. The husband is humiliated and replaced on his anniversary. It isn't cheating or even wife sharing. It's disrespect, and the husband's character is so weak and so pathetic that he pretty much deserves what he gets.

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by hindsight202003/29/16

Bad

Just not interesting.

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by sbrooks10303/29/16

I'm Giving This ONE More Chapter...

I'm giving this one more chapter or hubby to grow a set.

"You asked me what I wanted to do. And you got your answer." – If you need him to TELL you no, if you can’t control YOURSELF enough to say no on your own, then what kind of a marriage do you have? What happens if he’s not there to tell you no? Tommy himself said that if he was 5 minutes later getting back at the hot tub that you would have been fucking! Would that have been your husband’s fault, too?

She may not realize it, but he has a third choice: he can divorce her ass! Then she can fuck as many big dick man-sluts as she wants!

And he shouldn't have left the room. He should have stayed and recorded it, so that when they get divorced he can threatened to show it to their families, friends, co-workers, etc if she doesn't give him FULL custody with control over visitation.

"It didn't matter what I was going to say. My wife was going to be fucking Tommy again shortly one way or another." - That's right, and that's why her prior excuse that he could have said no is ridiculous!

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Another Yank loser

What is it with you yanks, grow some and tell her NO!!
I get it if you wanted to share but not where she gets to tell you against your wishes. Total disrespect.

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by dsthom195403/29/16

WOW

Well, I think your getting a lot of reactions from the readers, which is what you are after. If your story was based in reality, then it would be time for hubby to cut his losses and since he had grabbed his wallet and stormed out f his room in the resort, leaving his wife changing into sexy undies for the interloper. And considering the way that their conversation ended......Yeppers it would be the perfect time for hubby to grow the balls that he should have in the first place, and continued out of the lobby into a car and went home. By the time his wife would have figured out that he'd left and wasn't coming back. She would be on her own with "big dick" and friends. By the time she got back to town, she wouldn't be fit to be married let alone being a mom. Now, do you have the balls to write the rest of the story like this or is hubby going to bow down to his wife becoming a whore for big dicks for the rest of her life? So, whats it to be? LOL

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by Anonymous03/29/16

There are no redeeming characters to root for.

The wife is a lying cheater and the husband is a spineless wimp. I'm not saying he has to get all Rambo on their asses but no guy with an ounce of self respect would accept being disrespected like that. Not even if he was into that sort of kink.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

nice tail

Interesting story which has the Husband looking at his options. It is their tenth anniversary and they went away for a long weekend to reconnect. That tells me that Jill has become restless and listening to Tommy brag at the pool on his conquests has her looking for her youth and excitement again. It appears that she is a size queen and experiencing orgasms for the first time other than oral. This horse is long out of the barn and there is no way it is going back without a fight or bluntly to make his life miserable. The ball is now in his court and he can live with his wife having lovers and looking the other way or he can opt out and start a new life for himself. Well written tale and loving the emotional ride.

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by swingerjoe03/29/16

Works well as a parody

I have to admit I was laughing out loud toward the end. I don't know if this is supposed to be a parody of the typical cuck/humiliation fetish stories, but it works REALLY well if you accept it as such.

Nothing about this story makes sense. Why would a wife experience such a dramatic personality change? Why would a husband just stand there and accept what happened, without previously expressing a desire to be humiliated by another man? This is fetish fantasy at its most absurd.

Then there is the whole "big dick" fetish, where a woman experiences sex like she's never felt before, and now can never return to just "normal" sex with an average-sized cock. And of course, we will soon read the obligatory gangbang scene. Because now sex with just one man isn't enough for her. And hubby has 15 minutes to decide whether to sit and watch or file for divorce! Either way, it's happening, baby, because the girl can't help herself anymore! She's gone cock crazy! LOL.

I appreciate the effort, author, but this story would work far better in the Fetish category. (Unless it was your intent to be humiliated here in the comments section -- in which case, job well done.)

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by Vito196003/29/16

Option 3

Take back his wife, put his foot down, and kick Tommys ass!!!

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by cap535603/29/16

lust

this story can be so like real life. i can see how this can happen in real life very easily
mainly because of them listening to this guy all day. it had to affect her somewhat by all that he was saying and from what her friends have been telling her. to bad hubby didn't know what she has been hearing from her friends or he might have decided to leave the pool area that day. he put his trust in his wife but she threw it away when she decided to have the guy. she is only looking for herself and not what it could do to their marriage. at this point she doesn't care what it does as she is only thinking of herself. seems to me its time for him to either go with the flow or leave her. it may take a long time for her to get over how this guy makes her feel. and all that while she will be losing respect for her husband as he sits waiting for her. remember she did tell him he could have said no and make her leave in the beginning.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Ball Transfer....

Wife grows balls; husband loses his. Will his grow back in Ch. 03 so Tommy will have his kicked in ?

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Betrayal is Betrayal

Lust not love, there is always someone better out there, but hopefully marriage means more then just lust. However, now that she has given in to lust there is no taking back the betrayal, no "getting it out of her system"......Please, just end the marriage, a man's love for his wife shouldn't result in his humilation and acceptance of betrayal. I always hope for reconcilation, but she has no remorse, she shows no regret for the hurt she caused and continues to cause.....not one iota of sympathy is shown for the husband she supposedly loves.....no marriage here, and his love for her shouldn't force him to accept the unacceptable.

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by ramonbrook03/29/16

Well she is just a slut

She says it's up to her husband but she is just a slut who came out of her shell and now she can't be trusted! She is willingly giving up her family for an aggressive lover.

The husband left it up to her! Is he a WILLING cuckold or a just wimp who can't stand up to assholes? If he didn't want her to do it then he should have told Tommy to fuck off. Then get his wife out of there! But he didn't do that and is now paying for it!

Tell her her it needs to end NOW! If she doesn't agree then dump her! Or stay married and be a good little cucky!

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by Anonymous03/29/16

1*

Erotic? More like a fetish.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Ridiculous story

This story is so far from reality that it does seem like a parody as someone else commented.
We've done the hotwife thing and been swinging for over 10 years and this would never happen, ever. Bet this was probably written by some kid in their parents basement.
Garbage story.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

So, she decided she likes being a slut. So what?

The husband is the only unknown, except that he's not unknown. Just a timid undecided wimp, which explains why his wife decided to find out what a real man could do for her. Now she knows, and she likes it. Surprised? Just another day at the zoo, watching the alpha male slap down the useless irrelevant drone male. Real exciting and erotic. Thanks for trying.

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by Slirpuff03/29/16

WTF

And he's still there talking to her? Not real... you don't go from happily married to a slut in 10 minutes... But, this is his story and he can write it anyway he sees fit... But, at least how in something to give the guy at least one ball...

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Duh

Moronically simplistic story.

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by bassray03/29/16

Stupid story

Not much of a wife. I hope this is the end of it. She ended them so it's time to book. There is nothing here for him. Let her find her own way home.

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by bonnietaylor203/29/16

And guess what dear annony! You're the fucking momkey!! A 5

for effort and content and to help your score from you know who!!! In case you don't the asshole of LIT dear annony.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Shit another bonnietaylor2 piece of shit- must be related by incest.

Garbage as usual.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Loser

She has no respect for you, whitewashed her excuse to fuck around and blamed your lack of manhood, openly as a slut cheats in front of everyone at the hotel and screws the hell out of the stud with you there so...

She's right - you're not a man and now you are attempting to justify your conduct?

A real man left last night while she was fucking the stud. A real man would have taken her plane ticket, cancelled their joint credit cards, gone home alone, changed the locks and contacted an attorney and all...after he took some clear pictures of her with the stud for proof of adultery!

Love, you idiot, you're a tool, she's a player and a slut AND - she has NO Respect for you so...Get Lost...Loser!

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by impo_6103/29/16

His wife was the cheating bitch and he hated the lover?

His wife was the cheating bitch and he hated the lover? Why after what happened in the jacuzzy, was he still in the hotel? Why wasn't he in his way home to begin the divorce proceedings? As some comment said in part 1, the previous work from this writer shows only wimp and weak husbands, married to selfish and whore wives...So not good endings can be expect from this sad story...1*

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by Anonymous03/29/16

cancel

The stories here are just so bad its time to just shut down this site,
Most readers hate the stories anyway so just shut it all down and we can be happy again..

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by Mbgdallas03/29/16

Once she gave her explanation and her ultimatum it would have been over. If she had at least been apologetic I could have continued.

Wow, she would resent him? What a selfish bitch. What about him resenting her. Time to turn and leave and tell,her she can do what she wants but she is on her own.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Very good.

I resent young guys like Tommy but they have a way about them. So confident and masterful. Hubby is defeated and will come to like it.

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by BuzzCzar03/29/16

Funny

"So is it out of your system now?" I asked with some sensitivity..... "some sensitivity". That's the funniest line in this sad tale. Goodbye.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Not my cup of tea, but......

It's so well written that I had to give it a high score. Again, it doesn't matter what the critics think about the content, what the husband should have done, or what they would have done. It's the author's story, not yours. You're welcome to write one and submit it, and I'd hope that you'd write as well as this author but I doubt it. Also, I have a remedy for your dislike of the stories on this site in this genre. If you don't like them, quit clicking on the site and genre, and stop reading them. Apparently, you think that the stories should only be written to please your tastes, which shows your selfishness. Let the other numerous readers judge for themselves, and you can read stories that please you on some other site.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Old ex con

I'd have put him down and fucked him in the ass like a bitch.....and the wife would be history - after I knocked the shit out of her .... scraped his knuckles up .... then called from the road....reporting a rape

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by dc637003/29/16

Okay, uncle

This is a bit over board.

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by looking4it03/29/16

I will never understand the rationale that it is up to the husband to save the marriage by saying no because the wife us incapable of being strong enough to say so herself. Impress me by writing a story with the shoe on the other foot and the husband having a blatant affair in front if the wife and telling her that by not removing him from the situation she was condoning it. Come on BT and you other cuck fetishists, convince me why it's the husbands fault by not removing the wife from the situation.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

So Why

Are you still writing about the ex husband and refering to her as a wife... she is a divorced bitch by now.
So from now on bring in Jill the former cheating wife as the narrator and change the plot to May December for the bitchey old hen and the dastardely young studley low life poacher with the STD's.
And if you must speak of the former husband, let be about the wonderful life he was driven into.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

sorry whores should work at whorehouses and not be married, 1*

if she's married and does it, remember dead wives tell no lies. A sock with ballbearings in it, in the dark near Tommy's place at night a few well placed swings, the good looks are gone and the balls are mush. Duck in the bar pretend drunk, order more drinks, god I was so heart broken knowing my wife was fucking someone else I just drank my self into oblivion. Divorce the skank. 1*

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Why do Husbands take this crap from their wives

Writing not bad , but why is it the man problem to keep his wife in line and when she can't think for herself because of a Big Dick in this case , and then she will resent him if he said NO ........
I think he should dump her ass and go home , because the way this story going she will be leaving with Tommy and his friends anyway

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Yes...but

Yes. It was hot. But in the next instalment I want him to grow a pair.

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Divorce the bitch

Tape it send to all her friends and neighbors including her parents. If that was my wife I would go get me some fun items come back while they were doing it hit him in the head with a baseball bat,. Severe his dick and shove it down my wife' throat and ask her while I am doing it how she likes Tommy's dick now. This did happen in real life. We got there while this woman was choking on her lovers dick while the husband keep yelling at her how she liked his dick now.
Guys like Tommy will get the wrong guy pissed and end up jacked up The wife well she is just another dumb bitch who threw it all away for some dick. Not worth keeping.Her kids will be impressed at mom also as the find out what kind of slut she is and choose a dick instead of their family.
I hope you can give the husband back his dignity because in real life a guy like him will crack and would not be good for anyone around.
The other option would be to blow Tommy's brains out with a 40 cal while they were doing it and let the brain matter spill all over he wife. Wouldn't shoot her because she would remember that the rest of her life and feel like she couldn't get it off her.

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by deadone03/29/16

Boy what a short sighted self centered bitch

A. She says " But if you choose that I'll probably resent you for it and that resentment will likely build" My question WHAT THE FUCK IS HIS RESENTMENT!! She has said he can not and has not ever made her come. That he is shit.
B. When he acts more assertive she fires back fuck you
C. She has said this will continue AFTER they get back.
D. She has done and given things to dickweed that she NEVER gave to hubby!
Need I go on. There is no more marriage she has completely trashed it and him. What is left to return to?
Everything they would try to have sex, he would feel totally inadequate and she would be saying fuck your no Tommy. There wont be any trust ever again. If she is not home alone with him she will be fuck the next big dick.
If for some insane reason he stays (stupid people do stupid things) I would hop on pump it hard and cum without worrying about how she feels.
I still say tell her to go down to Tommys room then take everything and leave. She can find away home on her own (no ID no flying).

Burn baby burn

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by Ducky703/29/16

shit shit and more shit

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by Anonymous03/29/16

Choose your own ending :)

"I still can't believe this happened. I just never saw it coming and now it is too late. The horse is out of the barn I guess."

From the first couple of sentences of the first chapter it seem obvious that this won't just be a holiday thing. So its going to end either 1, he goes home, 2, she changes her mind(unlikely) 3, open/cuckold marriage 4, divorce or my favourite 5, double homicide

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by Anonymous03/30/16

Is this going to go to another chapter?

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by Anonymous03/30/16

WACC-ETY WACC!

DON'T TALK BACK!

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