please keep writing!
Thanks for the nice story. :-)
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! orBack to Gone Camping orMore submissions by hot_wrider.
[...]
Edit comment orSubmit Comment
Posting...
Comment posted successfully - click here to view it or write another.
Title of your comment:
Your public comment about Gone Camping:
Please type in the security codeYou may also listen to a recording of the characters.
Preview comment
Title your feedback:
Your feedback to hot_wrider:
If you would like a response, enter your email address in this box:
Send feedback
Sending...
Feedback sent successfully - click here to write another.
Username:
Password:Forgot your password?
Security code:
Your current user avatar, all sizes:
You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.
Select new user avatar:
Upload and save Cancel
User avatar uploaded successfuly and waiting for moderation.
Close
English
good 1st story
please keep writing!
Totally realistic. Erotic. ☆☆☆☆+ (4.45/5.0 = 89% = A) Also well written.
Thanks for the nice story.
:-)
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Gone Camping or
More submissions by hot_wrider.