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My Little Ventrue Ch. 01

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by superfeluously_e03/30/16

This is really enjoyable.

Great story so far - good dialogue, good world building, and pretty interesting plot. I did think the introduction to the characters was a little weak but the good dialogue and the speed of which this story developed mitigated that.

I look forward to your next chapter. Thanks for posting!

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by Anonymous03/31/16

Good stuff

This is really interesting. PLZ keep going.

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by mBrow03/31/16

Good start

The story seems well written and engaging.

I was amazed that Literotica had once again butchered a story title -- "Ventrue" ?? However, Googling "Ventrue" suggests that the author may have another plan in mind.

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by Paul_Mall07/06/16

ummm for the other commentors..

yeah this author is setting their tale in Vampire The Requiem. it's a tabletop RPG that's been out for a while. you might want to wikipedia it.

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by Anonymous08/14/16

Story Origins

Earlier origins may also come from the 1996 TV show Kindred The Embrace which was based on an RPG Vampire the Masquerade. Although the show only had 8 episodes I liked it and I think you are doing a good job with your story. Keep it going!

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