All Comments on 'Fucked My Hot Neighbour Pt. 01'

Won't be nice if "critics", such as the previous commentator, actually know how to write / spell themselves? Anyhow, I would say that your writing needs improvement, a little stilted, not enough detail and moved too fast, but still a good first effort and worth working on some more

that's write not right!! WTF, and you have the balls and nerve to say someone else should go back to school. You really are the Asshole Of LIT!!! So I too will give it a 5

Bad, bad, bad!