by HamptonsGuy27
It was ok but too short. Need some more character development. There was a couple of errors - "whole" instead of "hole". The main character changed into pyjamas which suddenly changed into boxers too.
Enjoyed your story but thought the picture was excellent. Write more stories and include pictures like this one.
Jim
It would have been hotter if the roommate joined ... Some bi action. ... But it made me cum.