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by Anonymous04/20/06

illiterate

this is surely a joke? the grammar is so bad that the story is unreadable.

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by Anonymous07/25/14

Please hire an editor!

I understand it's amateur writing, but when the grammar is this bad it makes reading the story very difficult. Good concepts overall, but by the writing gods please watch some you tube clips of basic sentence structure and grammar. There is another paragraph or 2 of missing words.

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