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The Man who Fell in Love again

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by legerdemer03/31/16

Resonates

I love this one. It gives voice to my own experience, simply, elegantly. The first and last stanzas are perfect bookends.

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by Ashesh903/31/16

but did he fall in love with the.......

Mother or the Child , second time round , GP ? 5-ed .

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by tazz31703/31/16

THE BIRTH REVISITED

in thought, word and reality. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Piscator03/31/16

Well done, my only quibble would be with
"She serenely presented him
with their son and he "
which is contrary to my exprience.

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