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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/30/16

Excuse me while I puke

Hey man, dos typos . Be cool and pay attention and one poem a day will give you time to get your shit together--one ex-lax a day is enough!
1.if we do he wrong
2.One can help but be drawn

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by Neonurotic03/31/16

Nice.

I like this one.

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by tazz31703/31/16

AND THEY HAVE NO FEAR

for flames will always surround her, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous04/02/16

Lovely

I think this is a beautiful poem, especially the last five lines. In response to that last ignorant comment: it must be nice to be so perfect. Who knew a couple of typos could make a person so angry and mean? Don't listen to that nonsense and keep writing! ;)

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