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Strands in Your Eyes

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/30/16

Strands????? in your eyes?

What is that, a jizz facial?

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by legerdemer03/31/16

Much to like here

I like this one. I hope you don't mind my saying so, I would have used exist rather than existence as the last word, for greater punch, immediacy:

No worries,
No cares.
Just... exist.

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