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Grandmother Joann

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by Anonymous

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by bucco4003/31/16

More exploring please

Please tell me you are doing a follow up chapter.

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by Anonymous03/31/16

Grandmother

you must write more this is great give us more!

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by happymuffin03/31/16

Make it longer

i love those kinds of Stories Grandson and Grandmommy together. no guilt no nothing beautiful but pls make the next stories a little longer

5 stars btw :)

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by 20silverock1603/31/16

Very Good

Great story! please ...more!

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by Anonymous03/31/16

Loved it

Great story, it sounded so simple and casual with no guilt, just the way it shoul be.

No silly padding, no trash, no rediculous unbelievable chat and a good length.

Next chapter please

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by Anonymous03/31/16

Great Story!

Enjoyed your story & I hope you write additional chapters! Maybe Granny could bring some of her lady friends to join the fun?

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by Anonymous04/01/16

Good story

Good story, but in serious need of editing. LOTS of grammar/spelling/syntax errors.

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by Anonymous05/31/16

A good first story

The early critical comments back in March are good and well intended. Write again and again, getting better each time. This story wasn't too short, but certainly could be followed by a second chapter, carefully done to develop a loving relationship between him and his grandmother. Always keep it simple and believable.

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by Anonymous06/14/16

Great story! The dirty talk was hot!!

Hot story! Love the dirty talk!!

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by Anonymous02/14/17

good granny

envious of that granson

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