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by Anonymous03/31/16

short

Very short. Take your time writing, no need to rush.
Try reading other stories for how the dialog is shown.
It is a good idea to at least give readers some idea of why the characters do things.
This story belongs in erotic couplings, not taboo/incest. Step-daughter of his girlfriend does not count, even if she is married and pregnant.

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