All Comments on 'Quads Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
bravo

just as good as the past ones...cant wait til part 7

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Excelent

How about the quads and Jack and Brenda share a three or four bedroom place in college? Can't wait until their college nights begin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Great

I loved this story but it took to long for the guys to hook up. But it was good. I want to see more bi fun in college...maybe convince their parents to join.

juanjsojrjuanjsojrabout 20 years ago
really hot story

great hot story I hope to see chapter 7 soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
meh

liked all of the others but personally didnt like biys getting involved with each other. kinda sounds like you were running out of ideas and situations for them to be in sexually. Dont try for story line to much it will develop on its own when you just put them together. With No. 6 all needed was just another chapter of pure sex between the 4 and nothin else then get the 2 cousins involved

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Fucking HELL YA!

My god man ur a genius. im a bi guy and i loved it at the end where all 3 guys just started to fuck each other mmmmmmmm, awsome touch.;) (drools all over own cock in pleasure)

KEEP WRITING! u are my god!

sweetlips1923sweetlips1923almost 20 years ago
Wanting More

I think that out of all the chapter this was by far this best please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wow

oh my god, that was so amazing. i loved the guy threesome. i cant wait to play around with my boyfriend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
i love this shit

this whole storie was great dude. i hope to see more and try to get the parents into the fucking >:).

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
So Fucking Hotttt

I Loved it your great at Writing only thing is after reading all 6 chapters I am sooo sore now !!! Keep em comeing please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
ehh

the guys on guys wasn't nessary... the others were better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Now THAT'S a jaw dropper...

I didn't see the boi on boi thing cumming. Made my pussy twitch, and I never thought two guys (or more) would ever turn me on like that...keep it up ! Your stories are great !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Best one

This is definately the best story in the quad series, please can we have more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
duuuude

dude guy on guy pretty gross but u must make more please lol man this shite is good

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
missing a chapter

Hello,

For some reason I do not see chapter 7. All other chapters are here. May be there is a reason?

Dwight

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
chapter 7

is listed under "group sex"

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Umm...

I didnt' like this chapter just because I'm not into strapons or gay sex. The sex scenes were hot though - just not something I enjoy.

wmaf1wmaf1over 16 years ago
Damn Good

I'm glad you had the guts to allow the guys to explore the bisexual side of sex. If more men would try it, the more they would like it. If whomever made us didn't intend us to be bisexual, they wouldn't have put our genitals in the positions that they are.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Too Gay.

It as great except for the guys. Would have liked to have seen the girls doing it to the guys.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Strange

Love this series but the gay sex spoils this episode for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
the guy-guy scene

loved the rest exept that scene

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Guy on guy ruined entire series for me

Since I am male and homophobic the Guy On Guy (GOG) stuff really turned me off. I wish people would warn readers when they do this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great series

Loved it all. Girl on girl, guy on guy. Only way to really get it all and enjoy all aspects of sex. Until you do you are not really into sex properly

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
awsome

this series is awsome i usually dont like guy on guy but you make it work great job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Loved it.

I loved it. Finally there is a guy on guy scene but the guy readers freak out. What is wrong with this picture? Why is it that when its girl on girl they are all for it but the guys they freak out? Hmmm be a little more secure. Don’t worry about. Liking it does not make you gay.

Dream_WalkerDream_Walkerabout 15 years ago
it was .........Good

i thought that it was a good chapter,the only problem i had was with the guy on guy scene wouldve appreciated some warning(dont get me wrong im not homophobic but the mental imagery makes me a bit uncomfortable)

Dream_WalkerDream_Walkerabout 15 years ago
it was .........Good

i thought that it was a good chapter,the only problem i had was with the guy on guy scene wouldve appreciated some warning(dont get me wrong im not homophobic but the mental imagery makes me a bit uncomfortable)

Dream_WalkerDream_Walkerabout 15 years ago
it was .........Good

i thought that it was a good chapter,the only problem i had was with the guy on guy scene wouldve appreciated some warning(dont get me wrong im not homophobic but the mental imagery makes me a bit uncomfortable)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
buzz Kill

if u wanna write guy on guy stories do it in he gay and lesbian section. You runed one of my favorite stories.

You started to go too far with ur characters not everyone in their family is going to have incest. and the whole my mother is my aunt crap gets confusing and isnt necessary to the plot and didnt add a single good thing to your story.

Keep em simple and sexual

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Was a great story.

I really liked reading this series of stories, and then I get to chapter 6 and there's a bit guy on guy it seems. The whole blowjob thing, I wasn't really okay with it, but I could stand it. And then I skim down a little further, and here you have three guys in one big pile. I don't know, people can say what they want about why I think it's okay for girl on girl action and not guy on guy, but I just thought it was a bit much.

Otherwise, it's a great story, great series, and don't listen to the people who tell you to stop going too deep with characters, it gives the story some background, and more interesting, keep writing. =]

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I was hooked; now I'm not so sure!

I was estatic with the series until this submission. I'm not bi and I have no interest in reading about a male bisexual/gay encounter. That type of story line turns me off quick. I understand that you've taken the quads, along with Jack and Brenda, through just about every sexual situation imaginable. However, I would just as soon have you end the series rather than see you resorting to the male bisexual encounter in this chapter.

One last road that you haven't traveled is the parents involvement as I suggested in my previous post. After that, I would declare the job well done and end it.

Your talent could very easily find us a new avenue with new characters.

Thank you for your efforts!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
not cool

dude writer that was not cool guys should have stayed with chicks and chicks going both ways

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
It was going so well

Why mess it up with this?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yum

Loved how you switched it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
loved the story now switch it back to guy on girl and girl on girl

it was good till now.switch it back

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Yum

I liked the switch you pulled guy on guy and girl on girl. Brilliant!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

sorry loved the story was incredible till you went guy on guy that kinda ruined it for me

dustdevildustdevilover 10 years ago
Excellent Reading

Good story all around. I hope to see a continuation of this series in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
love it

I love the series. I think it actually happens more then we realize and I especially like how the guys got into to sucking cock as I am a married man who loves to suck cock from time to time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Skip the faggot shit...

Was pretty hot till the fagget crap... Now air tight....!

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