Daddy and James Partner Up

your story

love your story, i have recently been fantazing about this exact thing, having a dad and brother take me, thier lil sis/daughter, i realize it would be considered odd and wrong by most but am delighted to find this story, very well written and hopefully looking forward to reading more from you soon, thank you for sharing. your very talented writer.

Please tell me you're working on a sequel? There NEEDS to be more!!

Great story, so far.

Love the way this story is headed, hope it is continued soon.

Uhhhhhhhhh .... Stunning beginning ... PLEASE GO ON!

Things is a terrific beginning ... Please, please, it needs absolutely to go on....

More than 5 stars from my side....

Daddy and James

Dang you for stopping now!

That's it?

I'm not sure which is worse, that this is all there is to the story or that you think so little about your own story you couldn't be bothered to use a chapter number in the title to warn people this wasn't a complete story.

oh, for heaven's sake,

what some readers find to complain about! Now it's lack of chapter headings, of all things. This is an excellent story by a gifted young lady author. It surely hits home. There are lots and lots of families where dad is very interested indeed in the cute little coochie between his baby girl's legs, and where the son of the family itches to shove his fat brotherly cock up his kid sister's tight little twat. Luckily, there are plenty of young females, like the commenter who wrote "your story" who'd love to get banged senseless by the big horny males of the family. Face it, family cocks belong up family cunts and creamy semen from family balls belongs up warm welcoming family twats. Now I'm leaving to enjoy the other stories by the highly talented EL.

Thank You

This is fantastic. Excellently done. I can only hope you continue further with this story. So damn horny now.

Wow!

I really hope you continue this story soon! Your other stories are fantastic. Don't wait so long between them.

Masterful....

Please continue this in more chapters...this was great...had my panties wet in mere seconds...thinking about the foreplay and the father taking her virginity while the brother watched

re: oh, for heaven's sake,

You like people shitting on you? Fine. That's your problem. "Writers" who can't be bothered to warn people they aren't posting a complete story either don't give a fuck about their own story or the readers -- probably both.

Love All your stories!

This one's off to a great start, thank you.

*****

Tests the reader's willingness to suspend disbelief but you manage it. Funny. Awkward. Very good.

Preplanned raped sounds so romantic when the author describes it...:(

Lol.....what if Aubrey refuses and cuts of dad's and James' penis' and calls the cops

Wtf

Finish the story you can't leave us hanging